Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This story tells the postage stamp story of the abused girlfriend discovering she has the goods that are highly sought after and realizes she is in charge of herself. I like the theme.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014

I really appreciate the read and review.

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

I like this story. It's written in a clear and understandable manner. The story is told well. Grady gets what he deserves and she finds a better guy. Great job.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014

thanks so much.

Comment from sibhus

Excellent

Yeah, you go girl, ta hell with that cheating dog. Good story that makes for a great entry for this contest. Its tough writing a complete story in a hundred words, but you have done an excellent job, and good luck with the contesst.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014

Thanks, I appreciate the review.

Comment from highlander104

Excellent

Definitely "karma". Now she has the pick a four hungry men who might just appreciate her. Enjoyed your story and the "get even" ending. Good luck in the contest.

Jean K.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014

Thanks very much.

Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

I really liked this one...not just because it was written well, but because it had an intentional beginning,middle,and end component. Nice story.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014

Thank you very much.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

What a wonderful first kiss entry for the contest. You told a great story in 100 words! Good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014

Thanks so much for your kind words.

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

Nice one, anonymous author. Except that going home alone bit. Six men smiling at you? You could have left dingbat Grady with the wench in the corner and taken the rugby team home.

Karma Sutra.


I love you too.


Av

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014

Ran out of words...would have had her sidle up to the bar and be the centre of attention, but alas, I broke the budget.

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Ahh-ha, a kiss from a secret stranger how wonderful. I enjoyed the story. This is a great response to the writing prompt. You told a very good story in only 100 words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014

Thanks so much.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

I like this a lot. Would not have guessed the ending, which is a good thing. Predictable can be boring! And Karma should never be boring.

My book that I'm posting, 'A Twist Of Fate', has a main character named, Grady, and I love, love him. Don't like your Grady so much! LOL...!

Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers,
Keep Smilin'... Jax

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014

Well, this Grady isn't much of a gentlemen--probably his mother's fault. LOL. Thanks.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

voice whispered, "you can - "You
Strong opening and closing lines - love the narrator's attitude
In 100 words you do an excellent job of writing a complete story with all the elements: setting, characters, plot, conflict, and a great resolution
Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014

Thanks, as always, I learn something from your reviews, wondering whether a capital belonged in a quote preceded by a comma. Thank you.