Orange Leaf-(5-7-5)
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Comment from Ola Awakan
Your poem is a typical example of 5-7-5 syllabic pattern of poetry. It also gives a picture of nature and it's features. I find it interesting as short as it is
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
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Your poem is a typical example of 5-7-5 syllabic pattern of poetry. It also gives a picture of nature and it's features. I find it interesting as short as it is
Comment Written 07-May-2014
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
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Thank you for your review
Comment from dennis0530
Autumn signals another change in nature's cycle. It is a transformation that heralds another renewal.
The writer's "brittle orange leaf" has changed from a pliable green and is now giving up its old state to give way to a new season. By nature's chemistry, it lost its vibrant color and is now going in a blaze of glory.
Plucked from a tree by a greater force, willingly or not it has submitted to mysterious circumstance.
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
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Autumn signals another change in nature's cycle. It is a transformation that heralds another renewal.
The writer's "brittle orange leaf" has changed from a pliable green and is now giving up its old state to give way to a new season. By nature's chemistry, it lost its vibrant color and is now going in a blaze of glory.
Plucked from a tree by a greater force, willingly or not it has submitted to mysterious circumstance.
Comment Written 07-May-2014
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
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Thank you for your review