What If Uncle Buck raised Superman?
A little Superman alternate tale20 total reviews
Comment from WritingsByG
Very nice retell. Uncle Buck was my hero too. Common sense, understanding backed up by a Mikita. Your writing has a very enjoyable flow to it. Thanks
G
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Very nice retell. Uncle Buck was my hero too. Common sense, understanding backed up by a Mikita. Your writing has a very enjoyable flow to it. Thanks
G
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much. I liked the Uncle Buck movie. I wished they'd made more.
Comment from Hatch1515
"Not much, Sam. He was discovered by a scout on the last leg OF HIS journey..."
"Well, ladies and gentlemen."
A few other minor mistakes lingered throughout, but all this poem needs are a few fixes.
All-in-all, this was a very interesting story. I've always like Superman, and Uncle Buck, to me, is a cult classic. Very intriguing look with combining two different, popular characters, and it was well done.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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"Not much, Sam. He was discovered by a scout on the last leg OF HIS journey..."
"Well, ladies and gentlemen."
A few other minor mistakes lingered throughout, but all this poem needs are a few fixes.
All-in-all, this was a very interesting story. I've always like Superman, and Uncle Buck, to me, is a cult classic. Very intriguing look with combining two different, popular characters, and it was well done.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much. You have good eyes. I missed those every time I read it.
Comment from adewpearl
hustled the class into the storm shelter, - add comma
You get inside Clark's inner emotions well
great dialogue with Uncle Jonathan
I'm laughing at his worries of breaking the girl's hand or knocking her teeth out :-)
You really think I could a ball player - You really think I could be a ball player?
I very much enjoyed this :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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hustled the class into the storm shelter, - add comma
You get inside Clark's inner emotions well
great dialogue with Uncle Jonathan
I'm laughing at his worries of breaking the girl's hand or knocking her teeth out :-)
You really think I could a ball player - You really think I could be a ball player?
I very much enjoyed this :-) Brooke
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much, Brooke. I wrote this as to a little bit of fun.
Comment from country ranch writer
cute story and a lively imagination you do have my lancelot I always like Clark and his family and it woul dbe nice to have the power to fix things in this worl
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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cute story and a lively imagination you do have my lancelot I always like Clark and his family and it woul dbe nice to have the power to fix things in this worl
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much. yes it would be.
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hugs and smiles to you and yours
Comment from angelface2
Hey, that was cute. Clark Kent would have made an excellent ball player. Oh, in one place you left out.. be.. a ball player. Nice job of writing. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Hey, that was cute. Clark Kent would have made an excellent ball player. Oh, in one place you left out.. be.. a ball player. Nice job of writing. Miss Sally
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much, Miss Sally. I will add that be.
Comment from ragamuffin
The title caught my eye and I had to read the story. Was not disappointed. Very clever and very humorous. More likely what would happen than what went down in the comic books. A very enjoyable story.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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The title caught my eye and I had to read the story. Was not disappointed. Very clever and very humorous. More likely what would happen than what went down in the comic books. A very enjoyable story.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Nicely written, fün spin on this Ä?omic book story. I like Uncle BucÄ·,not too social minded,but He did have a point,Clark nêeeded a trade. Good touch about the mail room
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Hi. Nicely written, fün spin on this Ä?omic book story. I like Uncle BucÄ·,not too social minded,but He did have a point,Clark nêeeded a trade. Good touch about the mail room
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah, well...Uncle Buck certainly didn't mince his words, now, did he? Of course he'd rather believe that Johnathon was having an extra marital affair, what with a new kid showing up all of a sudden. It would be easier to believe than Calrk being an alien from another far-off planet.
Having X-ray vision -- or simply even knowing someone who does -- would be...interesting, to say the least. Oh, the fantasies we could indulge, the things we could learn. At least Uncle Buck has Clark put it to good use, and not waste it on something foolish like looking for structural cracks in the dam, or other fool hearty things like that. The super-hearing, though, now that could be a curse, as well as a blessing at times. Sometimes, not knowing what someone has said about us is probably for the best.
So, Clark became a professional baseball player for the Metropolis Knights, all because of his Uncle Buck's love, guidance and attention. Well, I will say this, he definitely ought'a be good at it, and it certainly has to pay better than being a clerk in a newspaper mail room.
Excellent story, Lance, very imaginative and creative!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Hah, well...Uncle Buck certainly didn't mince his words, now, did he? Of course he'd rather believe that Johnathon was having an extra marital affair, what with a new kid showing up all of a sudden. It would be easier to believe than Calrk being an alien from another far-off planet.
Having X-ray vision -- or simply even knowing someone who does -- would be...interesting, to say the least. Oh, the fantasies we could indulge, the things we could learn. At least Uncle Buck has Clark put it to good use, and not waste it on something foolish like looking for structural cracks in the dam, or other fool hearty things like that. The super-hearing, though, now that could be a curse, as well as a blessing at times. Sometimes, not knowing what someone has said about us is probably for the best.
So, Clark became a professional baseball player for the Metropolis Knights, all because of his Uncle Buck's love, guidance and attention. Well, I will say this, he definitely ought'a be good at it, and it certainly has to pay better than being a clerk in a newspaper mail room.
Excellent story, Lance, very imaginative and creative!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much. I like Superman, but he was always too pure.
Comment from comanalbert
You had more than fun and it shows. Save for that buzzing in the room after Uncle has left the home base. If it is what I think, shame on you...he is after all Superman's uncle, that lady should have fainted the second after....(still humorous though)...
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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You had more than fun and it shows. Save for that buzzing in the room after Uncle has left the home base. If it is what I think, shame on you...he is after all Superman's uncle, that lady should have fainted the second after....(still humorous though)...
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from boxergirl
I'm a big Superman fan so I enjoyed your little revision of his story. It was interesting and entertaining from start to finish. 8-)
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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I'm a big Superman fan so I enjoyed your little revision of his story. It was interesting and entertaining from start to finish. 8-)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much.