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Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Childhood Memories."From victim to survivor of abuse.
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Comment from cleo85
A prime example for how complicate those things are, we consider simple. Your poem is true and seems simple because it is easy to understand for the reader and connect with the theme. You wrote so fluent in this complicated manner that the Codary structure seems hidden beneath an almost musical flow of words. I feel honored to deliver the illustration to the poem. Thank you!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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A prime example for how complicate those things are, we consider simple. Your poem is true and seems simple because it is easy to understand for the reader and connect with the theme. You wrote so fluent in this complicated manner that the Codary structure seems hidden beneath an almost musical flow of words. I feel honored to deliver the illustration to the poem. Thank you!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you for enjoying my poem-"childhood memories"
Your thoughtful review is much appreciated.
I am truly touched and humbled by yourcomments for it was the
use of your illustration which added depth and meaning to my poem
And I wholeheartedly thank you.
:-) Shirley
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Thank you for your kind reply.
Please excuse the generated message. Due to an eye surgery I am at the moment not able to maintain the site as necessary. Please be patient. I will review soon and as much as possible.
Cleo
Comment from Njorgensen
Great work. From where I sit, you captured the essence of this poetry style. A childhood home evokes so many emotions that still affect us today. Leaving those memories in the past is the only way to go. Thank you for sharing.
Njorgensen
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Great work. From where I sit, you captured the essence of this poetry style. A childhood home evokes so many emotions that still affect us today. Leaving those memories in the past is the only way to go. Thank you for sharing.
Njorgensen
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much.
I appreciate your time and generous review.
Comment from rouskin
Very emotional journey within a difficult format Childhood is the most beautiful of all life's seasons. It really deserves my Exceptional Rating
Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Very emotional journey within a difficult format Childhood is the most beautiful of all life's seasons. It really deserves my Exceptional Rating
Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much.
I appreciate your exceptional rating and comments.
Comment from Andrewajgblue
It new to me this poem style, it's really interesting and your wording is really effective, the way passing your childhood home brings memories to the surface,great job,
Andrew
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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It new to me this poem style, it's really interesting and your wording is really effective, the way passing your childhood home brings memories to the surface,great job,
Andrew
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you.
I appreciate your time and comments.
Comment from Zue65
This is the first time I have heard of a codary poem and you were successful in complying with the requirements for writing it. Childhood memories are always memorable and nice to remember where every room of the house reminds nostalgic moments for a child. thanks for sharing this poem.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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This is the first time I have heard of a codary poem and you were successful in complying with the requirements for writing it. Childhood memories are always memorable and nice to remember where every room of the house reminds nostalgic moments for a child. thanks for sharing this poem.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thank you for reviewing with interest and thoughtfulness.
I appreciate your time.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a thought-provoking post from the author in this piece of writing. This conjures up strong emotions as the reader joins the writer in this journey through the past.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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This is a thought-provoking post from the author in this piece of writing. This conjures up strong emotions as the reader joins the writer in this journey through the past.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Thank you Tomes.
I appreciate your thoughtful and generous review.
Comment from MoIronE13
I enjoy this write.
The sentiments and memories are clearly stated.
I often have dreams of my childhood home and the streets I grew up playing on.
Thanks for sharing your gifts..
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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I enjoy this write.
The sentiments and memories are clearly stated.
I often have dreams of my childhood home and the streets I grew up playing on.
Thanks for sharing your gifts..
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Thank you.
I appreciate your time and thoughtful review.
Comment from kiwijenny
My daughter thinks I remember too much ......and your poem has reminded me to just let go...and laugh..........because life is too short to be shackled by a child's memories if they are painful..I had to put an adult face on them to understand..
Well written
God bless
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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My daughter thinks I remember too much ......and your poem has reminded me to just let go...and laugh..........because life is too short to be shackled by a child's memories if they are painful..I had to put an adult face on them to understand..
Well written
God bless
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much for an understanding review.
I appreciate your comments and understand how as
Children we see things very differently.
Comment from Sankey
Great poem. I relate to the subject. I recently had the privilege of visiting my childhood home and being given a tour of it as it has been changed from what I know by it's new owners. In case someone goes on about the "it's" the new owners are it's possessive owners. Oh me language and diffrences across the world! Sigh!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Great poem. I relate to the subject. I recently had the privilege of visiting my childhood home and being given a tour of it as it has been changed from what I know by it's new owners. In case someone goes on about the "it's" the new owners are it's possessive owners. Oh me language and diffrences across the world! Sigh!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Thank you for a generous review"
Comment from l.raven
Hi Shirley, Not sure about this form...but you seem to have nailed it...you did a great write on your passed memories...and driving by your old home...and beautiful picture and a great poem...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Hi Shirley, Not sure about this form...but you seem to have nailed it...you did a great write on your passed memories...and driving by your old home...and beautiful picture and a great poem...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Thank you Linda.
Your time and comments are appreciated.
Nostalgia.
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you are so welcome Shirley...xxoo