Breathe
After the cold winter...breathe in spring17 total reviews
Comment from Dianemae
Great visual of my day today. We finally got some sun and a warm spring day. The deep breathe of clean fresh air and that wonderful smell of the outdoors, was a warm welcome to spring.
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Great visual of my day today. We finally got some sun and a warm spring day. The deep breathe of clean fresh air and that wonderful smell of the outdoors, was a warm welcome to spring.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
Comment from ennahanid
Still waiting for winter here, in fact autumn wasn't much of an autumn either...but I do love all the great writes that are anxious for spring and this one is no exception, very, very fine indeed and super topping picture as well. Good luck in the contest - Dinah
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Still waiting for winter here, in fact autumn wasn't much of an autumn either...but I do love all the great writes that are anxious for spring and this one is no exception, very, very fine indeed and super topping picture as well. Good luck in the contest - Dinah
Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
Comment from w.j.debi
Spring fever...I think it is about time for it to hit. Time for cabin fever to be over and get out of doors. This is a timely message. Good job following the prompt rules and best of luck in the contest. And with your spring fever.
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Spring fever...I think it is about time for it to hit. Time for cabin fever to be over and get out of doors. This is a timely message. Good job following the prompt rules and best of luck in the contest. And with your spring fever.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
Beautiful and stunning....it makes me want to be outside to breathe that warm fragrant air......hold me....Hold me Maker of it all
Our daughter is in labor ...Lo it is very slow...I hope everything goes ok..
Pray for Rebecca
God bless
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Beautiful and stunning....it makes me want to be outside to breathe that warm fragrant air......hold me....Hold me Maker of it all
Our daughter is in labor ...Lo it is very slow...I hope everything goes ok..
Pray for Rebecca
God bless
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Heavenly Father, I ask your warm hands and heart to welcome this wonderful new baby into the world. May Rebecca feel your loving encouragement and may she be renewed in her labor...Glory to You, and love to all in the wonderful family.God please bless them all. Amen
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Oh what a darling prayer....thank you the Dr has just arrived....
Comment from Andrewajgblue
This is quite a difficult style, but this is really poetic,I like the alliteration with first fragrant, I thought your message was clear and the picture was lovely
Andrew
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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This is quite a difficult style, but this is really poetic,I like the alliteration with first fragrant, I thought your message was clear and the picture was lovely
Andrew
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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Thank you for understanding this....:0). Blessings...
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece meets the criteria of the 2-10-2 writing prompt. The photo fits this piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Good alliteration with find/first/fragrant. Clear message that is short and simple.
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This piece meets the criteria of the 2-10-2 writing prompt. The photo fits this piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Good alliteration with find/first/fragrant. Clear message that is short and simple.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
Comment from rouskin
Find me I hide deep in spring's first warm fragrant breath
Hold me Spring fever indeed Good luck with your lovely writ
Blessings, Rouskin
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Find me I hide deep in spring's first warm fragrant breath
Hold me Spring fever indeed Good luck with your lovely writ
Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
Comment from victor 66
Your poem tells me, "How wonderful it is to be young and in love" or"It feels great to feel Young and be in love". Both interpretations are good. I have not a tried a '2-10-2' poem but sometime I'd like to give it a shot. Your poem looks like a good example. Good luck in the contest.
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Your poem tells me, "How wonderful it is to be young and in love" or"It feels great to feel Young and be in love". Both interpretations are good. I have not a tried a '2-10-2' poem but sometime I'd like to give it a shot. Your poem looks like a good example. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Nice, this sounds like the beseeching call of a long lost lover, beckoning for their love to find them.
Spring can't get here too soon for my tastes!
Nicely done, & good luck to you.
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Nice, this sounds like the beseeching call of a long lost lover, beckoning for their love to find them.
Spring can't get here too soon for my tastes!
Nicely done, & good luck to you.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
Comment from TAB_that's me
I long to breathe in spring - wish it would warm up though and not blow 40 mph every other day. Great poem, correct form, good luck.
Teresa
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I long to breathe in spring - wish it would warm up though and not blow 40 mph every other day. Great poem, correct form, good luck.
Teresa
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014