Comment from poetbear

Excellent

Talk about creative and original.
Well written and very savvy.
Out of the box and higher thinking piece.
Ther rhyme and the reasons are just extraordinary.
Well done. Well written.

 Comment Written 25-May-2014

Comment from comanalbert

Excellent

How come I've missed this one? You did them wrong so well, I am ashamed I missed the moment to share the spoils, but I remember seeing a cloud of feathers rising from the east. Keep pumping!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014

Thank you so much, brother. The next one, published tomorrow, may be even more of a pumper.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

solid rhyming couplets
good assonance in ridden, hidden, risked
lots of clever risque/suggestive imagery
I'm laughing out loud at the alliteration in vagina, verve or verse
lots of good internal rhyme
well composed and fun :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, Brooke! Perhaps I enjoy writing these too much. ;) I know the ladies certainly enjoy dismembering me, so to speak.

reply by adewpearl on 26-Mar-2014

Let's face it - few of us live life in the fast line, especially sexually - you have lots of women living on the edge if only in their dreams. LOL

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

That's funny, my friend. I just can't figure out if I'm the angel or the devil on the shoulder. :)

Comment from velvetElvis

Exceptional

holy cow!

the rhythm to your rhymes hit like hammer blows, I can feel the nail being driven with every verse.

totally onboard with this one. you never disappoint, and this one delights.

love it!

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, my friend, and I apologize for the delay in responding. I really appreciate that sixer and your great comments.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, marillion, you did an excellent job writing this couplet poem about the rogue's penchant to breach the unattainable and put her up satisfied, lol

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, my friend.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

I hate to say this, but the profile looks photo-shopped, but then you do say you work out. Okay, so I finally jumped on the bandwagon to see what the Rogue was all about. I gotta admit, he sounds like the perfect lover, willing to please not just himself but his partner. Who would want to tame that??

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Photo-shopped? Really? I'll take that as a compliment, but it's all me. Thanks for the review.

Comment from A Jesterstear

Exceptional

Disgusting, shocking, rude, course, sexist, shovanistic,
lewd, libidinous, degrading, appalling, BRILLIANT!!!!!
I'm behind but knew I had to save a six for the rouge. Incredibly funny, as usual. AJ.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Love it, AJ. Thanks so much, my friend, for your wonderful sixer, and for all of the flattering (to the rogue) adjectives. :)

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Hi, David.

Thanks for the 'warning', but even though I have a 'delicate nature', I wanted a quick thrill to escape my pussy on the lap crocheting routine. :-)

All your couplets are hilarious, but I particularly like the sexual innuendo and double meanings in:

'By tongue or tool or fingers, it's a guarantee you'll come
To find the tingle lingers in your tummy (or your bum)'

So many great laughs here. I wonder if this 'rogue' is as horny as he makes out, though it's fun to believe it. :-)

Thanks for the excellent post.

Cheers, Ted

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Hi Ted. Sorry for the delay in my response. The warning is for those who keep coming back to this, and even after getting through the 'wall', still moralize or criticize me for writing these, or questioning my ethics, morals, principles, etc.

Thanks, as always, for your great review.

Comment from catch22

Exceptional

This is such a skillful verse that I have to give this six stars. The whole poem did have a bouncy rhythm due to good use of sound devices and I love the internal rhyming. I apologize to all the hens, but this is simply an outstanding and well-crafted write so sorry ladies--this deserves the stars:)

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, my friend, for that sixer, especially considering the chance you take reviewing it. :) I love your comments, my friend. Much appreciated.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

I enjoyed this well written poem, it was written with great insight of a certain act. I will always think of this when my says which he often does."I feel peckish for your apple pie"

Well done sorry no sixes left. Mary

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, Mary, for your understanding and your virtual sixer. :)