Where Change Happens
Hard truth10 total reviews
Comment from MagKing
We don't vote for change
We vote for someone to blame
Change comes from within
Very true word indeed
Only a changed man can truly change a nation
MagKing
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014
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We don't vote for change
We vote for someone to blame
Change comes from within
Very true word indeed
Only a changed man can truly change a nation
MagKing
Comment Written 04-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much. yes, that is true.
Comment from in777wr#
Your political senryu is very good. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. The message that,
Change comes from within
is very true. This poem has a thought provoking message. Nice job.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Your political senryu is very good. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. The message that,
Change comes from within
is very true. This poem has a thought provoking message. Nice job.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you have all the correct components for this
you allow the reader to see and feel that you don't vote for change just someone to blame as change has to come from within
flows well cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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good luck in the contest
you have all the correct components for this
you allow the reader to see and feel that you don't vote for change just someone to blame as change has to come from within
flows well cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
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welcome..SC
Comment from barleygirl
HOWL-alujah! I almost clicked away before reading when I saw Obama's photo here . . . I'm so sick of the blame game. However, your message turned out to be a VERY VERY VERY pleasant surprise, as well as very true! Amen to this! Great job offering us a political message with an answer not an accusation! (((HUGS)))
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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HOWL-alujah! I almost clicked away before reading when I saw Obama's photo here . . . I'm so sick of the blame game. However, your message turned out to be a VERY VERY VERY pleasant surprise, as well as very true! Amen to this! Great job offering us a political message with an answer not an accusation! (((HUGS)))
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much. I appreciate the hugs. :)
Comment from Acquired Taste
I happen to agree with your premise - but that is not the way our world - political world words.
Great words for a senryu - not at all practical in the here and now. Too bad though.
Picture is perfect. AT=/
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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I happen to agree with your premise - but that is not the way our world - political world words.
Great words for a senryu - not at all practical in the here and now. Too bad though.
Picture is perfect. AT=/
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you. I don't know. History is full things once thought impractical in our world. MLK, Lincoln, just to name a few proved that the world can change, with enough courage and will. Someone just has to start.
Comment from zanya
Wow an interesting way to look at 'change' - in these times we live in we are told by mentoring gurus that all change must come from within and an equally interesting observation 'We vote for someone to blame'
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Wow an interesting way to look at 'change' - in these times we live in we are told by mentoring gurus that all change must come from within and an equally interesting observation 'We vote for someone to blame'
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Leineco
You don't vote for change
though you might vote for what you hope is a catalyst
Change comes from within
and needs to be nurtured and sown
We vote for someone to blame
and that's to our shame
we should be voting in hope - not resignation.
well done
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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You don't vote for change
though you might vote for what you hope is a catalyst
Change comes from within
and needs to be nurtured and sown
We vote for someone to blame
and that's to our shame
we should be voting in hope - not resignation.
well done
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from rouskin
You don't vote for change We vote for someone to blame
Change comes from within Excellent artwork and powerful message Best of luck and be blessed
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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You don't vote for change We vote for someone to blame
Change comes from within Excellent artwork and powerful message Best of luck and be blessed
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from Bina1
We recognize the promises for what they are....lies at best. Where is the hope? Maybe next time? A fine poem, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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We recognize the promises for what they are....lies at best. Where is the hope? Maybe next time? A fine poem, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from Kingsland
I don't review too many of these ultra short poetic formats, as I just don't find many of them worthy of a review from myself. This one however spoke to me and should raise a few eyebrow of those that read it. I enjoyed reading this well delivered poetic message... John
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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I don't review too many of these ultra short poetic formats, as I just don't find many of them worthy of a review from myself. This one however spoke to me and should raise a few eyebrow of those that read it. I enjoyed reading this well delivered poetic message... John
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much