I Was Just Thinking
thoughts29 total reviews
Comment from nordicgirl
Yes, crazy seems an accurate depiction. This is an amazing piece of free flowing thought. Some unique takes on various things. The part about shadows was wonderful. Many interpretations which i believe was your intention. NG
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Yes, crazy seems an accurate depiction. This is an amazing piece of free flowing thought. Some unique takes on various things. The part about shadows was wonderful. Many interpretations which i believe was your intention. NG
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Crazy is the only way. Thank you so much. Yes, I left it very open. mikey
Comment from Petriesan
inner cities s/b "city's"?
great language, this: I feel your rush to judgment blow by me like a very angry updraft
well written piece.
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inner cities s/b "city's"?
great language, this: I feel your rush to judgment blow by me like a very angry updraft
well written piece.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from l.raven
OMG Michael, you read this to your wife??? Ya nut...LOl...what a right...I think there are times we all feel we are losing it...wow...Michael...what a write....very well done...you writer you...Luff Linda xxoo
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OMG Michael, you read this to your wife??? Ya nut...LOl...what a right...I think there are times we all feel we are losing it...wow...Michael...what a write....very well done...you writer you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
my goodness mikey sound a bad case of smiling ha ha I immediately considered hospitalization. I'm talking about put me in a straitjacket and cart my carcass to the looney-bin beautifully penned excellent read really enjoyed dear friend
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my goodness mikey sound a bad case of smiling ha ha I immediately considered hospitalization. I'm talking about put me in a straitjacket and cart my carcass to the looney-bin beautifully penned excellent read really enjoyed dear friend
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from faragon
I have to agree with your wife....Crazy! But in a good way. I was a little confused at the beginning, but the more I read the clearer it became. I have often wondered what it would feel like being a shadow.
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I have to agree with your wife....Crazy! But in a good way. I was a little confused at the beginning, but the more I read the clearer it became. I have often wondered what it would feel like being a shadow.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, so now FS will have to add a new category to their types of writes called "Insanity". Some may find this quite impossible or unbelievable, but those of us who live with such know differently. Imaginatively insane. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, so now FS will have to add a new category to their types of writes called "Insanity". Some may find this quite impossible or unbelievable, but those of us who live with such know differently. Imaginatively insane. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from lancellot
You really do know how to catch a reader early and then make it damn hard to turn away. Great job all around.
Suggestion¦
None of them (was) [were] ... i would change because you are talking about more than one.
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You really do know how to catch a reader early and then make it damn hard to turn away. Great job all around.
Suggestion¦
None of them (was) [were] ... i would change because you are talking about more than one.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from Nichola
I love it. Reminds me of the stream of consciousness pieces that I used to write. Very inspiring and original. Great piece.
Nichola
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I love it. Reminds me of the stream of consciousness pieces that I used to write. Very inspiring and original. Great piece.
Nichola
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from Nomar Chagrin
Whoa, this is some heavy stuff here, Mikey. Don't recall any of your other stories being quite in this same vein.
I sort of got entangled in this guy's mind here. Wondering what the final outcome would be.
The plane metaphor worked well.
(not sure, but I think "over powering" and/or blood drenched might need hyphens)
Anyway, this is good writing. Keep 'em coming.
~ Jack
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Whoa, this is some heavy stuff here, Mikey. Don't recall any of your other stories being quite in this same vein.
I sort of got entangled in this guy's mind here. Wondering what the final outcome would be.
The plane metaphor worked well.
(not sure, but I think "over powering" and/or blood drenched might need hyphens)
Anyway, this is good writing. Keep 'em coming.
~ Jack
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from barleygirl
Your wife is correct. You have nailed "crazy" quite well in your rambling, scrambled diatribe here. I wonder if crazy people are this introspective, tho. Not sure. Hope this isn't a permanent affliction for you. Thanks for sharing & challenging us as readers.
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Your wife is correct. You have nailed "crazy" quite well in your rambling, scrambled diatribe here. I wonder if crazy people are this introspective, tho. Not sure. Hope this isn't a permanent affliction for you. Thanks for sharing & challenging us as readers.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014