Comment from Fandoodle

Excellent

Lovely picture of this delicate flower perfect for a wedding. A bouquet of innocence a nice touch. Thanks for sharing it.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

delicate and pure
a bouquet of innocence
fragile Baby`s Breath
Superb presentation
Perfect syllable structure 5-7-5
Alliteration-- Baby`s Breath
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2014

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Truly an innocent flower...it can make a plain vase of flowers come to life...I love this picture and your poem is beautiful...very well written

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2014

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

They are so delicate and fragile. You have portrayed this poem in an attractive way and the descriptive metaphor of
"bouquet of innocence" is well done. Great job!

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2014

Comment from MoonWillow

Excellent

Excellent, Anon. Such a delicate little flower as you say. Beautifully done and beautiful presentation Thank you so much for joining the prompt and for following the rules. Good luck to you in the contest. :)MW

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

beautiful pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count with a great focus on one flower, as required by the prompt
lovely descriptive detail that creates a serene mood well
nice alliteration in bouquet/baby's breath
Brooke

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014