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Love comes in all shapes and sizes

family means love

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Comment from Silent1rose
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To be young and free
was all that mattered to me
til' one became three

Aaww. ^^ This is very well written. Family is everything, and they will always be there for us. ~ Rose

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2014

Comment from rouskin
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Compelling pairing of photo and poem
Your skilful word-play enshrines a profound truth.
It really deserves to be a winner. Congratulations!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014


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Comment from LoannaLois
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This sure is my personal"all time best"! I love, love, love every syllable.The accompanying wonderful picture dares you to not smile, laugh, or just feel joy! Congratulations! You deserve every award.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014


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Comment from Ridley Williams
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Hello Poet,
I think you have hit the nail on the head with this entry...for the end result of love, at times, results in two becoming three, lol. Wonderful thought and delivery. Best wishes in the contest, Bill

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014


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Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi,
yeah, the cutest entry in this contest hands down... words and visual compliment each other perfectly.

All the best in this contest... but I think I might know the winner?

Wonderful construction.

With our thoughts we create,
life,
James.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014


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Comment from visionary1234
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a delightfully unique take on the prompt, where everyone else has interpreted 'love' to mean only between a couple - first passion etc etc. Well done! :)S

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014


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Comment from Cajungirl
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What a beautiful love poem. Your line and syllable count per line are correct. This is an outstanding contest entry. Best of luck in the contest. The picture is perfect.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014


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    U R welcome and Congratulations on your contest win.
Comment from jaded831
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What an excellent poem to show love. I truly feel yours captures love better than the others, but I have to read the rest to be fair.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014


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Comment from emrpoems
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To be young and free

was all that mattered to me

til' one became three.
A complete thought in three short line.
And the content says much while we are young we just want to be free but things change once you have that family.
Perfect syllable count5-7-5.


Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014


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Comment from Rubylou
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It's amazing that someone so tiny can have the greatest impact on a person's life. One's perspective of what's matters can change instantaneously. Rubylou

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014


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