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Nonet12 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
I'm not sure what your message is, but can appreciate the touch of mysticism in this poem. Your words go well with that fabulous image. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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I'm not sure what your message is, but can appreciate the touch of mysticism in this poem. Your words go well with that fabulous image. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from MagKing
This is a fine writing and good concept too. But I find it hard to five, because it doesn't go with the rules.
The rule said "Nonet poem" to be a nine syllable from the first and decrease in descending order. But this was not in accordance with its laws. Unless this format is also accepted by the rules, if so, enlighten me?
MagKing
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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This is a fine writing and good concept too. But I find it hard to five, because it doesn't go with the rules.
The rule said "Nonet poem" to be a nine syllable from the first and decrease in descending order. But this was not in accordance with its laws. Unless this format is also accepted by the rules, if so, enlighten me?
MagKing
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Hi,
Thank you so much for the positive review.
It is as per the rules as first line has 9 syllables, second has 8, and so on to the last with 1 syllable.
Have a great day! :)
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Your second line had Nine syllables. Perhaps you should reread and see the erreor
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Perhaps you should reread and make changes to the error
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece meets the criteria of the Nonet poem as the syllable count descends from nine syllables to one. Good alliteration with soul/shows/signs...seeking/spell. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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This piece meets the criteria of the Nonet poem as the syllable count descends from nine syllables to one. Good alliteration with soul/shows/signs...seeking/spell. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much.:)
Comment from Smoothiecool
great picture
good luck in the contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel the darkness stripping one of living and seeking some magic to transform one life again
great enjambment to allow to flows freely
great alliteration in
"susceptible" "soul" "show"
"seeking" "spell
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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great picture
good luck in the contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel the darkness stripping one of living and seeking some magic to transform one life again
great enjambment to allow to flows freely
great alliteration in
"susceptible" "soul" "show"
"seeking" "spell
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thanks for this lovely review.:)
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welcome ..SC
Comment from rouskin
This is a really good poem and a worthy contest entry
Excellent artwork to complement this poem
Best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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This is a really good poem and a worthy contest entry
Excellent artwork to complement this poem
Best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you.:)
Comment from Keturah Martin
It is really something how one can get just the right syllables in and write a clear message. Congratulations on a great job. The picture goes well with it all. Keep up the great talent.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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It is really something how one can get just the right syllables in and write a clear message. Congratulations on a great job. The picture goes well with it all. Keep up the great talent.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the positive comments.:)
Comment from DonandVicki
Well organized nonet. Very enjoyable to read. The poem starts off in darkness and warms up as it goes down the page. Very well done. Don
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Well organized nonet. Very enjoyable to read. The poem starts off in darkness and warms up as it goes down the page. Very well done. Don
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the positive comments.:)
Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written poem. Your nonet structure is in good order. Your poem reads, and flows well. This is a good entry for the contest. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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This was a well written poem. Your nonet structure is in good order. Your poem reads, and flows well. This is a good entry for the contest. Nicely written.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the positive comments.:)
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You're welcome.
Comment from JB Lynn
Wow! This is breathtaking and I didn't even realize you were following a strict writing format until I reached the end and read the prompt rules. This is a sign that you focused more on the content first, rather than the form; that's what makes this piece shine. I thought you chose a smart image to pair with this, as well. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Wow! This is breathtaking and I didn't even realize you were following a strict writing format until I reached the end and read the prompt rules. This is a sign that you focused more on the content first, rather than the form; that's what makes this piece shine. I thought you chose a smart image to pair with this, as well. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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I am pleased you like it so much. Your comments are so uplifting. I appreciate it. Thank you for this lovely review!
Have a nice day! :)
Comment from SusanKay
Beautiful created, and presented. The graphics, and written word coincides with each other. Very well done,I enjoyed reading; and will be looking forward to reading, and seeing more of your creativity.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Beautiful created, and presented. The graphics, and written word coincides with each other. Very well done,I enjoyed reading; and will be looking forward to reading, and seeing more of your creativity.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Hi,
Thank you so much for your lovely comments and glowing stars. It means a lot. I am glad you like it so much. I appreciate your comments.
Have a nice day! :)