Comment from CreativeXXXX

Excellent

A good 5-7-5 poem which follows the conventions correctly. An interesting and controversial topic, which we don't know the answers to. Good luck with the competition.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014

Thank you for the great review and comments,

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I am hoping it will keep banging. We are just beginning to explore the rest of the universe. We really have not explored the world like we should. Humans know only a tiny bit of the miracles that are out there. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014

thanks for the great review,

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This is a great combination of picture and poem to create the image. It is hard to imagine this eternally expanding universe. I wonder what lies beyond the space it is filling?

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014

to answer your question More space. Thanks for the great review. I appreciate it.

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest
your 5-7-5 has the required components
the three line count
the required 17 syllable count
your few words allow the reader to see and feel the image of the world starting with a bang and continuing to expand
cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014

Thanks for the wonderful review and best wishes.

reply by Smoothiecool on 08-Jan-2014

welcome...SC

Comment from skye

Excellent

Your choice of art is dramatic, tying the perfect haiku together. The big bang theory that continues to expand is a great subject for this contest.
Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014

Thanks for the wonderful review.

Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

Yes the universe appears to be expanding everyday. Your poem reads, and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. I enjoyed reading this poem.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014

Thanks for the great review I appreciate it.

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

started with a bang
will continue to expand
the whole universe

you betch'ya! Nice use of the form :-)
(personally, I like the idea of fading out, better than being squished! LOL

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014

I suppose, but we wont be around. thanks for the review

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is very true. Very good 5-7-5 poem for the contest. It has the perfect syllable count. Good luck in the contest.
~Teresa~

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

And so it is - the 'big bang' or at least we are told it was thus- and it continues its onward march 'expand' - and a superb pic

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014

Thanks for the great review

Comment from rhonny

Excellent

i like this poem. it speaks of a mystery we can't fathom let alone solve. your words draw us into the realms of wonder. your words and lines flow well.

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014

Thanks for the great review.

reply by rhonny on 08-Jan-2014

:)