The Sun-(5-7-5)
sun producing sun rays6 total reviews
Comment from Lynette Marie
As I'm watching yet another snowfall out my window, this poem and picture gives me hope for the coming summer. You've captured the sun in its glory. "Radiates" is the perfect word, and your poem radiates with warmth!
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As I'm watching yet another snowfall out my window, this poem and picture gives me hope for the coming summer. You've captured the sun in its glory. "Radiates" is the perfect word, and your poem radiates with warmth!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2014
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Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love watching the sun rising. The brilliant colors make you welcome the day. It is one of the many great things that makes you want to rise in the morning. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
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I love the picture. I love watching the sun rising. The brilliant colors make you welcome the day. It is one of the many great things that makes you want to rise in the morning. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
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Comment from Smoothiecool
great picture choice
good luck in the contest
your 5-7-5 has all the required components
the three line count
the required 17 syllable count
your few words allow the reader to see and feel the bright sun radiating heat upon the earth's surface
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
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great picture choice
good luck in the contest
your 5-7-5 has all the required components
the three line count
the required 17 syllable count
your few words allow the reader to see and feel the bright sun radiating heat upon the earth's surface
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
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welcome...SC
Comment from Jackarrie
Golden sphere of heat
radiates on earth's surface
bright rays of sun shine
This is a very good entry into the contest. all syllables correct. a fab picture if the sun.
Good luck. Mary
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Golden sphere of heat
radiates on earth's surface
bright rays of sun shine
This is a very good entry into the contest. all syllables correct. a fab picture if the sun.
Good luck. Mary
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
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Comment from rhonny
very nicely written with artwork that compliments the text nicely. your gentle words almost show us the sunshine radiating. good lines throughout.
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very nicely written with artwork that compliments the text nicely. your gentle words almost show us the sunshine radiating. good lines throughout.
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Comment from Darkhorse555
This is beautiful, I love the feeling the picture gives me and your choice of words is perfect, this gives a scense of summery joy and a brightness to ones heart, very nice read
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This is beautiful, I love the feeling the picture gives me and your choice of words is perfect, this gives a scense of summery joy and a brightness to ones heart, very nice read
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Thank you