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One day at a time 60 word

A cancer patient.

6 total reviews 
Comment from EMB
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This is one of the few short, short, short stories that really leaves the readers hanging. And I'm also left thinking, "How well can a person fight it outside of the hospital?"

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
    I had to check this one out I had forgotten what I had written for the 60 word contest, The fight has to be one of mental strength, In this case she is waiting for a trial, if this is successful her worries will be over. if not I am afraid it is not good news.
    So the fight goes on. Thanks for reviewing Mary
Comment from BeasPeas
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An inspiration to all of us who have been touched by this or any other illness. This is a resolute patient who is determined to follow through with her treatment. God bless.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
    Thank you for the review and your comments Mary
Comment from Janie King
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I worked in the medical field for 45 years and the patient will live much long, sometimes even overcome by God's intervention the disease. When they give up it's pretty much over. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
    Thank you for the great review and the informative comments.
Comment from Smoothiecool
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good luck in this contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel the fight against Leukemia and the in and out of hospital and the fight to beat it
cheers SC

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
    Thanks for your kind review
reply by Smoothiecool on 04-Jan-2014
    welcome
Comment from RedGryffyn
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Great poem. It was short but nonetheless I found it amazing. It's truthful and influential. Motivational and meaningful in so few words. Fantastic job.

Red Gryffyn

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
    Thank you for the great review and the wonderful comments.
Comment from mermaids
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I like the determination of this lady to win this war. Your word are vivid and inspiring,showing the strength of the human spirit.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
    Thank you for the great review.