To Cherish Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Wings"Free Verse Poetry
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Comment from mfowler
I really like this one Michael. It's so simple yet so full of truth and love. That butterfly metaphor is pretty and then perfect when you match it with esimplest but truest of statements: it is love
that transforms
the humblest of creatures
and adorns them
with wings
Good stuff!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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I really like this one Michael. It's so simple yet so full of truth and love. That butterfly metaphor is pretty and then perfect when you match it with esimplest but truest of statements: it is love
that transforms
the humblest of creatures
and adorns them
with wings
Good stuff!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Most pleased you liked this one. I liked this myself. Thank you very much, mikey
Comment from annatberry
I liked your poem. It was full of feelings and it came out in your writing. Your picture was displayed very well for your poem. Great job!!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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I liked your poem. It was full of feelings and it came out in your writing. Your picture was displayed very well for your poem. Great job!!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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So very pleased you enjoyed it. Lovely compliments to hear. Thank you so much, mikey
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello michael
I agree with your words and thought
without love there are no wings or growth
both your theme and words are beautiful
I very much enjoyed your layout and format
your presentation is marvelous
the title set the tone of the entry
may all be nurtured and have love and know love
all is well within the entry
this was a pleasure to read
thank you for sharing your talent
ann marie
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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hello michael
I agree with your words and thought
without love there are no wings or growth
both your theme and words are beautiful
I very much enjoyed your layout and format
your presentation is marvelous
the title set the tone of the entry
may all be nurtured and have love and know love
all is well within the entry
this was a pleasure to read
thank you for sharing your talent
ann marie
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Lovely words and comments. You make me so happy with your wonderful compliments. I am very pleased that you enjoyed my little poem. thank you so very much, mikey
Comment from Darkhorse555
stealing the wings smiling like a butterfly out of a cotton soft cocoon in softest feelings beautifully penned piece dear friend
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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stealing the wings smiling like a butterfly out of a cotton soft cocoon in softest feelings beautifully penned piece dear friend
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Glad you liked this my friend. I liked it myself. much thanks, mikey
Comment from n.rosej.
Whoa, yeah...totally dig this. What beautiful sentiment, and to write about it. Your wording here gives great description, and you always choose such cool imagery! I'll say it again, so very beautiful!! Blessings : )
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Whoa, yeah...totally dig this. What beautiful sentiment, and to write about it. Your wording here gives great description, and you always choose such cool imagery! I'll say it again, so very beautiful!! Blessings : )
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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You are so sweet to say so. I kind of like this one myself. I am very happy that you do too. thank you very much, mikey
Comment from l.raven
Hi Michael, So very well said...a beautiful transformation...so very well written and the perfect picture...xxoo Luff Linda
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Hi Michael, So very well said...a beautiful transformation...so very well written and the perfect picture...xxoo Luff Linda
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Most happy you liked my little poem. Thank you so very much. Cool picture I agree. mikey
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your so welcome...xxoo
Comment from krys123
Thank you Michael for sharing this original and sedulous poem with fans, myself another readers/writers. A very well written piece of work of the syllogistic and transformation of a simple butterfly. Very well written to this fact you displayed the imagery which portrayed the many factors and becoming of a butterfly. You have a good running God bless Mikey.
AK
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Thank you Michael for sharing this original and sedulous poem with fans, myself another readers/writers. A very well written piece of work of the syllogistic and transformation of a simple butterfly. Very well written to this fact you displayed the imagery which portrayed the many factors and becoming of a butterfly. You have a good running God bless Mikey.
AK
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Glad you liked this little piece. I was pretty pleased with it myself when I finished it. ha! Thank you very much. many blessings, mikey
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You are so welcome Mikey
Comment from Cookie333
Then how come I can't fly? I wanna fly (she whines). Whenever I see the word 'nightshade' I think of a local plant. I like your image better,
methinks you may have tempted my write with this one though,,,watch out MIKE. I have a saying, "Beware...if you tempt the write, your name's in lights"
thanks karen
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Then how come I can't fly? I wanna fly (she whines). Whenever I see the word 'nightshade' I think of a local plant. I like your image better,
methinks you may have tempted my write with this one though,,,watch out MIKE. I have a saying, "Beware...if you tempt the write, your name's in lights"
thanks karen
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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You can fly. You have written about it. You, so far, are just having trouble with direction.....down! hahaha. Ah yes, the poisonous nightshade. Always give in to the temptation to write. Hmmm Lights.... Isn't any publicity good publicity? Or, does that just apply to Kardashians? mikey
Comment from Stephen Wolff
A very romantic take on nature! I like it though I'm a cynical old evolutionist! Well balanced rhythmically and satisfyingly compact.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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A very romantic take on nature! I like it though I'm a cynical old evolutionist! Well balanced rhythmically and satisfyingly compact.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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I am both. I think that God used evolution to create everything. Talk about straddling the fence! hahaha! Can't ignore all the evidence. Glad you liked it. mikey
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And uncomfortable too! ;-)
Comment from tbacha58
it is love
that transforms
the humblest of creatures
and adorns them
with wings
Hi Mike, this poem I could not read it yesterday, due to the writing, now I did and its beautiful Mike, the picture is super, and the poem has so much depth. Hugs Terry
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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it is love
that transforms
the humblest of creatures
and adorns them
with wings
Hi Mike, this poem I could not read it yesterday, due to the writing, now I did and its beautiful Mike, the picture is super, and the poem has so much depth. Hugs Terry
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much. Yeah, I had those big fat letters. hahaha. I am glad you went back and looked again. You have made me think about how it looks and things like that. so, I thank you for that. I am so glad you liked this. I did too!! mikey
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Hi Mikey, that day when you posted your poem, we had just had a few sharing mail about how to write what to do ETC, so I thought to myself, shut up Terry, stop bugging this guy, he will not like me anymore...haha..so I could not read it, and said Nothing........so I am glad you fixed it, I am glad I read it, and I am very glad you still like me. Your best friend Terry.......smile.....life is beautiful Mike. Bless u xoxoxo