Comment from Jade Lawson

Excellent

Indeed, childhood to many people is very different from what used to be in the past, but so is the overall style of life.
Really good flow and enjoyable to read. The rhyming didn't seem forced.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013

Thanks so much for a generous review and comments. I appreciate it.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

This was so true back in those days, a total different mind set to today. We did have to make our own fun not just buy in the shop. I remember making my own doll with old material, very crudely, the cot was a shoe box that I attached a string to pull it along.
well written with aabb rhyme I love it. Thanks for sharing. Mary.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing with a generous five stars. I appreciate it.

Comment from zybk

Good

It was an okay poem your rhyming was also pretty good. Some parts weren't as good and it could use a lot of work but, I liked it. Although it seemed you didn't have a very good childhood.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013

Thanks for commenting. Maybe I'll stop by and review some of yours.