Alphabet Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Code Words"Exercises Creating Poems in Alphabetical Format
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Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi Treischel,
You almost did it; wrote and excellent free verse poem that almost made sense, In fact It did make sense except for the "device controlled by activation". Thanks for the laugh. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Hi Treischel,
You almost did it; wrote and excellent free verse poem that almost made sense, In fact It did make sense except for the "device controlled by activation". Thanks for the laugh. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Thanks Preston. A laugh is the payback I was looking for.
Comment from Sararb
You did a great job with this one. I don't think that I could ever achieve one of these. It looks like it would be really difficult. I haven't seen anything that you couldn't write about. Thanks for sharing! Sararb :)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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You did a great job with this one. I don't think that I could ever achieve one of these. It looks like it would be really difficult. I haven't seen anything that you couldn't write about. Thanks for sharing! Sararb :)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thank you Sara. I appreciate the compliment.
Comment from ravenblack
Well,you managed to add a bunch of key jolts in the alphabet z to a all about how to use short lines effectively. effectively A poem within a poem written about poetics. Impressive.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Well,you managed to add a bunch of key jolts in the alphabet z to a all about how to use short lines effectively. effectively A poem within a poem written about poetics. Impressive.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thank you Ravenblack. It was just for the fun of it. A brain exercise. I was happy to find that picture. I had already written the poem, but Yahoo Images really came through for me.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Got a lot of time on your hands, huh? Funny format that you had a lot of fun
writing. Presented an enjoyable read and admire the versatility of this author!
Good job Tom. Smiles to you on this lovely summer morning. Robin :)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Got a lot of time on your hands, huh? Funny format that you had a lot of fun
writing. Presented an enjoyable read and admire the versatility of this author!
Good job Tom. Smiles to you on this lovely summer morning. Robin :)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thanks Robin. Enjoying a sunny morning.
Comment from SteveY
Now this was a very fun read! It sure looks like you said a lot but once you've read it, you still don't know what you just read! Wonderful!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Now this was a very fun read! It sure looks like you said a lot but once you've read it, you still don't know what you just read! Wonderful!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thank you SteveY. You make me smile.
Comment from NicciFaye
Very well done Treischel! I enjoy reading these...they are very challenging to me, as its too restricted for my brain...lol...you created a truly animated and highly creative reverse poem. I enjoyed this.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Very well done Treischel! I enjoy reading these...they are very challenging to me, as its too restricted for my brain...lol...you created a truly animated and highly creative reverse poem. I enjoyed this.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thank you Nicci.. At my age, I need to exercise the old brain regularly.
