Jerry Jing-Jang the Lawman
JJJ is deputy for a day39 total reviews
Comment from writeapoem
This is a neat story in a poem. The cowboy is a great character, and a great legend. The image compliments the western scene.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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This is a neat story in a poem. The cowboy is a great character, and a great legend. The image compliments the western scene.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is a terrific story in rhyme. You really set the western mood and this reader had many clear images floating through her mind as she read. Lou
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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This is a terrific story in rhyme. You really set the western mood and this reader had many clear images floating through her mind as she read. Lou
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. He's a fun character. Thanks for your wonderful review.
Comment from Gianinas
Morning found Rusty on the trail
With Jerry Jing-Jang waiting to toss him in jail.
Rusty the rustler was caught unaware,
Likewise the cowboy, for the sheriff was there.
He said "well done, thanks to Jerry Jing-Jang
I'll now take the prisoner and Rusty will hang."
Even for the not so happy ending, or who knows.., the poem's melodic rhythm and captivating story were keeping me interested from beginning to end.
Just a little disappointed at the end, (a job well done is better than an effort thwarted, in my opinion-Hollywood would never go for this..).
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Morning found Rusty on the trail
With Jerry Jing-Jang waiting to toss him in jail.
Rusty the rustler was caught unaware,
Likewise the cowboy, for the sheriff was there.
He said "well done, thanks to Jerry Jing-Jang
I'll now take the prisoner and Rusty will hang."
Even for the not so happy ending, or who knows.., the poem's melodic rhythm and captivating story were keeping me interested from beginning to end.
Just a little disappointed at the end, (a job well done is better than an effort thwarted, in my opinion-Hollywood would never go for this..).
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Thanks for the six! I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. He's going to be riding for a while yet, so I can't wrap it up too neatly. I have to leave an opening for future adventures. Some of his old ones are available in my portfolio, if you're interested. Thanks again for the six.
Comment from chasennov
'Jerry Jing-Jang, The Lawman.' "A Cowboy is what I'm meant to be." Very good Western poem you wrote here. I also thought your work was well formulated.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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'Jerry Jing-Jang, The Lawman.' "A Cowboy is what I'm meant to be." Very good Western poem you wrote here. I also thought your work was well formulated.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang.
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You're always welcome.
Comment from Steve Pantazis
This was a fun romp through the wild west of your imagination. I like the play on words and the interplay of characters as you weave your stanzas in a very easy rhythm. Well done of a fine piece of work!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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This was a fun romp through the wild west of your imagination. I like the play on words and the interplay of characters as you weave your stanzas in a very easy rhythm. Well done of a fine piece of work!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello there Cindy
This is very well written and has superb visuals as well. I was a cowboy 50 years ago, and it was such a lovely life. Your poem reminds me of days gone by
Bear
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Hello there Cindy
This is very well written and has superb visuals as well. I was a cowboy 50 years ago, and it was such a lovely life. Your poem reminds me of days gone by
Bear
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. I'm sure it would be wonderful to be a cowboy. Thanks for your wonderful review.
Comment from GracieAnn
This poem has humorous and consistent a-a, b-b,c-c rhyming scheme that honors the genre of the ranch and country life. The realization of what one is meant to do is a great conclusion to the poem. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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This poem has humorous and consistent a-a, b-b,c-c rhyming scheme that honors the genre of the ranch and country life. The realization of what one is meant to do is a great conclusion to the poem. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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I'm glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
What a rustic, frolicking tale of the old west, penned in sing-song fashion with a thriving, jiving, bouncy beat.
This tale of the cowardly sheriff, Rusty the rustler, and our hero of the day, old Jerry Jing-Jang himself, was very well done and so well executed. It reads almost like a fabled song of the old west, sung long ago in taverns.
Commendable achievement, and a poem well done!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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What a rustic, frolicking tale of the old west, penned in sing-song fashion with a thriving, jiving, bouncy beat.
This tale of the cowardly sheriff, Rusty the rustler, and our hero of the day, old Jerry Jing-Jang himself, was very well done and so well executed. It reads almost like a fabled song of the old west, sung long ago in taverns.
Commendable achievement, and a poem well done!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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What a wonderful review! I'm glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang so much. He's one of my favorite characters to write. There are more of his adventures in my portfolio, if you're interested. Thanks again for a wonderful review.
Comment from Cookie333
What a smooth- flowing story line. After all that and ok Rusty is free. This one speaks to the nature of our justice system. I wish you luck and thank you for sharing your story with us
K
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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What a smooth- flowing story line. After all that and ok Rusty is free. This one speaks to the nature of our justice system. I wish you luck and thank you for sharing your story with us
K
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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If JJJ caught Rusty, what would he do then? Got to keep him around for another adventure. LOL I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from GregoryCody
Haha what a clever poem. This is witty and very well written. You paint the character well. Its like a story within a poem. Fantastic piece and seriously it was fun to read.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Haha what a clever poem. This is witty and very well written. You paint the character well. Its like a story within a poem. Fantastic piece and seriously it was fun to read.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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I'm glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for the great review.