Prison Break Out
there's more than one kind of dynamite5 total reviews
Comment from A Matter Of Words
This was a great rewrite of an amazing biblical story. It is this type of modernization of The Word that reaches the youth. Excellent.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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This was a great rewrite of an amazing biblical story. It is this type of modernization of The Word that reaches the youth. Excellent.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Thanks! I appreciate your reading!
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You're welcome.
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Ah, yes, I know the story of Paul and Silas well. To behold such a thing ....I enjoyed reading your story for this contest, my friend. Good luck with this.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Ah, yes, I know the story of Paul and Silas well. To behold such a thing ....I enjoyed reading your story for this contest, my friend. Good luck with this.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Thank you. :)
Comment from rchurra_
Okay story. Didn't really interest me. It was kind of like you were just interpreting a story from the bible in your own words. It doesn't really make sense either. If they were just men of God why would they be deemed dangerous. Maybe I'm just misinterpreting it, but either way I didn't like this story. Like I said earlier, it was just "okay".
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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Okay story. Didn't really interest me. It was kind of like you were just interpreting a story from the bible in your own words. It doesn't really make sense either. If they were just men of God why would they be deemed dangerous. Maybe I'm just misinterpreting it, but either way I didn't like this story. Like I said earlier, it was just "okay".
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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I'm sure you are right. I really didn't do this story justice. I guess I needed more words than the 100 word limit. I think if people knew that the Apostle Paul used the Greek root word for dynamite in describing the power of the Gospel message.
Thanks for reviewing and commenting. Dennis
Comment from humpwhistle
I have to give you points for your unique approach
to this prompt. I'm not certain it's a complete story,
but that doesn't seem to have been your intent.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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I have to give you points for your unique approach
to this prompt. I'm not certain it's a complete story,
but that doesn't seem to have been your intent.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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Thanks Lee.
Comment from wandering
I love the exposition of 8 verses in such few sentences, which have stated completely the message. Your words explode and keeps me interested and focused. You did the message justice.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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I love the exposition of 8 verses in such few sentences, which have stated completely the message. Your words explode and keeps me interested and focused. You did the message justice.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013
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Thank you. I don't feel I did this great story justice. I felt constricted by the 100 word limit.