Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

Very good story. I know that this type of thing actually happens and it must be awful. Your story conveys some of the horror of it.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013

Thanks for reading and reviewing. It is horrible and as you say it does go on. People trafficking is now the second biggest criminal enterprise behind drugs. It's so horrific.

Comment from A Matter Of Words

Excellent

Nicely written. The reality of this scenario is beyond comprehension to any of us who live in safety; to escape one hell and be trapped into another. Excellent.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013

Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you liked it.

reply by A Matter Of Words on 09-Jun-2013

you're welcome.

Comment from KYPollard/El Gato

Excellent

Oh, this is a tragic little story that happens all over the world. I enjoyed reading your story for this contest, my friend. Good luck with this.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

A well done piece with topical social undertones.
The sex slavery market takes thousands of victims every year. Mostly from the poorest parts of the world.
Best of luck at the polls.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013

Thank you very much for the review. I would love it if this story was made up but unfortunately it happens every day. Thanks for reading.

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

That's so creepy, and it happens all the time. I'm glad it's fiction in your case. You need to check your second sentence. It's incomplete. We're is short for we are. You don't need the apostrophe.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013

Thanks for reading and for the advice. I've fixed the errors that I missed. Thanks.