Life's trials
Don't allow trouble to get you down, be an overcomer28 total reviews
Comment from Amira.Naguib
Starting with questions, is always brilliant, it challenges the mind, adding to it that you ask the right questions, the questions that are asked by each one in the back of their heads, but out vanity is discarded.
In the second paragraph by adding the word "probability" you feed your readers' ego, you give them the satisfaction of the probability of not being that stupid to do such stupid things, yet they keep reading as their subconscious mind has been challenged by the questions in which they have answered "NO" as you said. Then smoothly you refute what they are doing and give evidence that are unbreakable that what they are doing will only make them unhappy and will not lead to what they striving for.
After that you present the solutions, summing up with facts from the society surrounding them that what you presented actually works.
i love it.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Starting with questions, is always brilliant, it challenges the mind, adding to it that you ask the right questions, the questions that are asked by each one in the back of their heads, but out vanity is discarded.
In the second paragraph by adding the word "probability" you feed your readers' ego, you give them the satisfaction of the probability of not being that stupid to do such stupid things, yet they keep reading as their subconscious mind has been challenged by the questions in which they have answered "NO" as you said. Then smoothly you refute what they are doing and give evidence that are unbreakable that what they are doing will only make them unhappy and will not lead to what they striving for.
After that you present the solutions, summing up with facts from the society surrounding them that what you presented actually works.
i love it.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Thanks, Amira, for going back and reading one of my old ones. Your comments are insightful, and you've responded to all the major points in the essay. I'm delighted you liked it! Peace!
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i am more than happy that you find my review insightful, this was actually a way for me test my writing abilities, i have always wanted to actually write some of my ideas and post it some where, but i was intimidated, i wish you would review what i post on this website, it would be of great deal to me.
Thanks
Comment from muezza56
very well written and constructed and constructive look at anger issues and how to find the mental possitive attitude to cope with them. although i might question "have a belief in the impossible" i would personally go for 'the plausible, is the feasibly possible' phylosophy, the author of this offers a very clear way to elevate those that are particularly down
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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very well written and constructed and constructive look at anger issues and how to find the mental possitive attitude to cope with them. although i might question "have a belief in the impossible" i would personally go for 'the plausible, is the feasibly possible' phylosophy, the author of this offers a very clear way to elevate those that are particularly down
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thanks for stopping by to read "Life's trials." I appreciate your encouraging comments and generous rating. Cheers!
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a well written piece that contains many useful tips for anyone who wishes to make the most out of this life. I totally agree with you that displaying negative emotions does not help our course in any way. well done
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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This is a well written piece that contains many useful tips for anyone who wishes to make the most out of this life. I totally agree with you that displaying negative emotions does not help our course in any way. well done
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thanks for stopping by to read "Life's trials." I appreciate your encouraging comments.
Comment from TonyD
Thanks for this inspirational piece. It came at a point in my life as I looking back when that only frustrates. Looking and moving forward is the only solution. Past mistakes are only good to remember what we should not do again.
Thanks again.
Tony
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thanks for this inspirational piece. It came at a point in my life as I looking back when that only frustrates. Looking and moving forward is the only solution. Past mistakes are only good to remember what we should not do again.
Thanks again.
Tony
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Tony, thanks for reading, commenting and rating my article, I appreciate it. For more information, you might want to read what this author has to say on the subject. Peace!
http://liveloveleslie.com/2012/02/08/stuck-in-a-rut-how-to-move-forward-in-life/
Comment from mroberts
This essay is well written and full of positive advice and strategies. While I don't share your rosey view of life and self-help, I applaud your efforts at encouragement and support to those whose lives are on the skids. I noticed a few spelling and grammar issues. There's no need for a comma after doggedness in your next to last paragraph. Suceed is spelled incorrectly. A comma, not a semi-colon, is what you need in your second sentence in your Develop a Vision section. Good work.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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This essay is well written and full of positive advice and strategies. While I don't share your rosey view of life and self-help, I applaud your efforts at encouragement and support to those whose lives are on the skids. I noticed a few spelling and grammar issues. There's no need for a comma after doggedness in your next to last paragraph. Suceed is spelled incorrectly. A comma, not a semi-colon, is what you need in your second sentence in your Develop a Vision section. Good work.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thanks for stopping by to read "Life's trials." I appreciate your encouraging comments.
Comment from alexisleech
I wish we were standing face to face so I could take your hand and shake it. Every word is spot on. A year ago I was an angry woman and going exactly where you suggest - nowhere! I'm not sure who I was angry with, but being widowed was the catalyst. Without my soul mate, this was a very strange place, and all I knew was that it wasn't my fault. Having said that, I let it drag me down until very recently. Now ready to take on the world, and in the throws of doing so, I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of writing.
I just wish I had read it a year ago and not wasted so much time!
Kudos, my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed this!
Alexis x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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I wish we were standing face to face so I could take your hand and shake it. Every word is spot on. A year ago I was an angry woman and going exactly where you suggest - nowhere! I'm not sure who I was angry with, but being widowed was the catalyst. Without my soul mate, this was a very strange place, and all I knew was that it wasn't my fault. Having said that, I let it drag me down until very recently. Now ready to take on the world, and in the throws of doing so, I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of writing.
I just wish I had read it a year ago and not wasted so much time!
Kudos, my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed this!
Alexis x
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thanks again, Alexis!!!
Comment from gazzagodbod
Love your writing my friend this is a fabulous piece thank you for sharing with us I see the same things it's always the ones closest that get hurt when someone's hurting in themselves great work gazzagodbod
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Love your writing my friend this is a fabulous piece thank you for sharing with us I see the same things it's always the ones closest that get hurt when someone's hurting in themselves great work gazzagodbod
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thanks for stopping by to read "Life's trials." I appreciate your encouraging comments.
Comment from mermaids
Attitude is everything, we can change our attitude and how we see things. I try to see problems as challenges, not problems. I like your paragraph about anger, so many people wast time with negativity and being crabby. Things do change when we think positively and try to be pleasant instead of yelling at everyone.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Attitude is everything, we can change our attitude and how we see things. I try to see problems as challenges, not problems. I like your paragraph about anger, so many people wast time with negativity and being crabby. Things do change when we think positively and try to be pleasant instead of yelling at everyone.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thanks for stopping by to read "Life's trials." I appreciate your encouraging comments.
Comment from jjstar
Really interesting post. I do think many do that. I have spent my life teaching, so I have always played the role of conflict manager. Okay, there may have been a few times I can remember having blown up (finding out about wrecked cars, stupid decisions my kids made). Most of my life I have always practiced the conflict resolution model in situations that require it. Always comes out much better. Good job!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Really interesting post. I do think many do that. I have spent my life teaching, so I have always played the role of conflict manager. Okay, there may have been a few times I can remember having blown up (finding out about wrecked cars, stupid decisions my kids made). Most of my life I have always practiced the conflict resolution model in situations that require it. Always comes out much better. Good job!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thanks, jjstar for stopping by to read "Life trials." I appreciate your encouraging comments.
Comment from adewpearl
a powerful opening question - this is such a common thing that I imagine almost all readers are answering yes, that this has happened to them at least once in a while in their lives
Eradicate Angry - Eradicate Anger
you offer very wise advice, and I too believe people can change
Brooke
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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a powerful opening question - this is such a common thing that I imagine almost all readers are answering yes, that this has happened to them at least once in a while in their lives
Eradicate Angry - Eradicate Anger
you offer very wise advice, and I too believe people can change
Brooke
Comment Written 03-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thanks for stopping by to read "Life's trials." I appreciate your encouraging comments.