A Little Viking's Tale
A rhyming short story for children122 total reviews
Comment from Artasylum
Boy oh boy that was a difficult interaction and I am so happy to see that Eric finally prevailed... I was holding my breath on this was... nicely done... thanks so much. yours, di
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Boy oh boy that was a difficult interaction and I am so happy to see that Eric finally prevailed... I was holding my breath on this was... nicely done... thanks so much. yours, di
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
I enjoyed reading this this is a very creative and inspired peace captivated from the beginning to the end wonderful written beautiful picture thank you again for showing us have a beautiful
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I enjoyed reading this this is a very creative and inspired peace captivated from the beginning to the end wonderful written beautiful picture thank you again for showing us have a beautiful
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the exceptional review
Comment from Eunice Amero
THis is a very encouraging poem. You did a great job. There are so many of us ready to quit but thats not the way to go. Your poem is lovely worded so well. Poor Eric. Thank you for sharing.
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THis is a very encouraging poem. You did a great job. There are so many of us ready to quit but thats not the way to go. Your poem is lovely worded so well. Poor Eric. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the exceptional review
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You are more than welcome. Take care
Comment from Poetofheart2013
Wow what a very cute and clever poem.
It's very creative of you
To write wonderful and
Awesome poem full
Of fun.and adventure!
I really enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Wow what a very cute and clever poem.
It's very creative of you
To write wonderful and
Awesome poem full
Of fun.and adventure!
I really enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review
Comment from Boogienights
This is a delightful children's story poem with a great message. You should never give up of let obstacles get in your way. I thought it very entertaining, thanks for sharing. :)
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This is a delightful children's story poem with a great message. You should never give up of let obstacles get in your way. I thought it very entertaining, thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your excellent review
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Ericdagoose,
Nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting a Moral: We should not stop until the mission is accomplished.
The last two stanzas are particularly noteworthy.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Hello Ericdagoose,
Nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting a Moral: We should not stop until the mission is accomplished.
The last two stanzas are particularly noteworthy.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks for getting into and for the excellent review and feedback
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EricDaGoose, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is a good story. Children should be able to learn an advice i.e. "Don't give up."
When people are given a task to do, don't give up even faced with difficulties. This is like what this story tells you "Don't listen to the stop Sign." but continue until you complete your task.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by Goodadvicechan on 17-Oct-2021
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This is a good story. Children should be able to learn an advice i.e. "Don't give up."
When people are given a task to do, don't give up even faced with difficulties. This is like what this story tells you "Don't listen to the stop Sign." but continue until you complete your task.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by Goodadvicechan on 17-Oct-2021
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Halloween is around the corner. please visit my story "The Twin Boys". You will like it.
Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Rachel L
Hello Eric,
your poem was pretty neat. I could see children enjoying it very much, you don't really hear about vikings too much anymore I think kids would find that neat
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Hello Eric,
your poem was pretty neat. I could see children enjoying it very much, you don't really hear about vikings too much anymore I think kids would find that neat
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the exceptional review and kind words
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author.
Very good and really cute!!!!!!!!!
Really entertaining!!!! Good job!!!!! May God bless you and your family!!!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Dear author.
Very good and really cute!!!!!!!!!
Really entertaining!!!! Good job!!!!! May God bless you and your family!!!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you I have no family are you willing to adopt me?
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Any child would love this story of Eric, the little Viking, and Petey, his parrot. This was a great poem about facing fears, courage, and one friend encouraging another. The imagery was wonderful. Your artwork fantastic.
Enjoyed the 2nd/4th line ending rhymes in each stanza.
My favorite line was: 'Life gave gifts that were seemingly free.' This line would be a great discussion opener between parent and child.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Any child would love this story of Eric, the little Viking, and Petey, his parrot. This was a great poem about facing fears, courage, and one friend encouraging another. The imagery was wonderful. Your artwork fantastic.
Enjoyed the 2nd/4th line ending rhymes in each stanza.
My favorite line was: 'Life gave gifts that were seemingly free.' This line would be a great discussion opener between parent and child.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review
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You are so welcome!