Alphabet Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Criminal Tendencies"Exercises Creating Poems in Alphabetical Format
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Comment from Sharrum
I really like your ABC poem. I haven't seen it written in that form. You did an excellent job as far as I can tell. I enjoyed reading it very much. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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I really like your ABC poem. I haven't seen it written in that form. You did an excellent job as far as I can tell. I enjoyed reading it very much. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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Thank you much Sharum.
Comment from LenSive
I like the rhythm of your word choices--but I confess i haven't any idea what it's about. "Every failing Gallaxy heal"--not sure I understand.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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I like the rhythm of your word choices--but I confess i haven't any idea what it's about. "Every failing Gallaxy heal"--not sure I understand.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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Fair point, even my wife had trouble with that one. I guess I stretched the concept that teenagers think they know everything and are invincible. Thanks for taking the time to read it.
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When I fail at first go, I put it aside and let my unconscious work on it for awhile. Then with replenished streams of creativity, I plunge into re-working the poem. It doesn't always save the poem, but when it does the feeling of accomplishment, of bringing the dead back to life, is rewarding indeed.
