Alphabet Poems
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Comment from doris1022
cool shot of the camara. the poem seems alittle forced to me and not making simple sense. lol don't call me dense I can do it myself. lol keep the mud less than 2 feet for safety. lol
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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cool shot of the camara. the poem seems alittle forced to me and not making simple sense. lol don't call me dense I can do it myself. lol keep the mud less than 2 feet for safety. lol
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Thank you Doris
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Thank you Doris
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a good poem, but i think it would have been better if the story you told later was somehow included in the poem proper to enhance understanding. cheers
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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This is a good poem, but i think it would have been better if the story you told later was somehow included in the poem proper to enhance understanding. cheers
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Thanks for the review. Point well taken.
