Comment from Dustybones

Excellent

Need a xanex after reading the Alphabet Poem to day. Good job, you have a nack for writing this format. Great work at staying focused.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012

Thank you hope I didn't give you a brain twist.

Comment from kellymarino

Excellent

I've never read an ABC poem before, so I'm delighted to have this one be my first. I love the way you described your view of America, tap-dancing down the alphabet with each word. Very well done!

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012

Thank you Kelly. Glad you enjoyed this format. I am smiling at your "tap dancing" description.

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

A hard, biting beat - terse words, that leave no doubt as to their message.

(I have to confess that the combination of colour hurt my eyes and distracted my enjoyment of the words - maybe the red background could be made gentler?)

You have the soul of a true poet!

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012

Thanks for the review. Your the second person commenting on the color. Quess I'll have to change it.

Comment from alexisleech

Excellent

Well, one of my favourite words is Juxtaposition, so you got my attention right away. Having said that, this is the first time I've had difficulty reading a poem because of the font colour, so would suggest a greater contrast. Great use of words!

Alexis x

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012

Thanks for the review

Comment from ernesto escarro

Exceptional

Let Freedom Roll

The constitution established by the great men in the country
let freedom roll,
it disregard oppression an generation is seeing the light of justice mandating the movement of the nation.
Hail to the great mind seeing the welfare of the people.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012

Thank you Ernesto for this ringing review and the six stars. Recognition is always appreciated.