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Exercises Creating Poems in Alphabetical Format
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Comment from
GarthL
I think you've done a great job here, very tricky. I'm inspired to give this form a try. Can't think of anything to suggest, you nailed it! 'Always believe....' Well done!
I'd be certain there's an illustration you could find that would add to the presentation though. Cheers.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2012
Thanks for the review. I have been thinking about adding some Artwork. Good suggestion.
reply by GarthL on 11-Nov-2012
Good choice of illustration, well done! Not sure about the bright pink background now but it's playful.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
Thanks to your suggestion, I really like the improvement. I caused me to add pictures to the other two ABC Poems in my book so far. Thanks
reply by GarthL on 11-Nov-2012
Thanks for being receptive to suggestions, it's the mark of an open mind. Glad it inspired you, good luck with all you do!
Comment from
Gungalo
Nice use of the alphabet for this one poet. You have successfully used every one of the letter and given them all a place in your format.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2012
Thanks for the review. glad you like it.
reply by Gungalo on 10-Nov-2012
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