Comment from Cool Beans

Excellent

I love the picture you chose! I like the use of tails of love entwine. Seahorses are the wildest sea creatures to watch and I think you captured the beauty of their essence brilliantly in your piece. Great job!

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Wow, romance in the sea. In minimal words, your poem is image-filled, romantic, and narrative.

I love the play on words in the last line. I enjoyed the "tail." :)

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from gazzagodbod

Exceptional

aww this is simply beautiful my friend such wonderful little creatures and your words touched my heart loved it xxxgazzagodbodxxx

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Thanks for such a generous amount of stars and I am glad this poem touched you. Thanks again. Elaine

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Ahh, that is so lovely, and the picture is perfect for your words. Tails of love entwine...' such lovely words. Good luck in the contest! xsx

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Titanx9

Excellent

What strange love - sea horse with its "tiny dragon heart" sings to the lovely mermaid in the sea. What a winsome story of an impossible love. Great job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Meta~Mark

Excellent

Mermaids and seahorses is a fine little ditty in.this 575 poetry contest I thought you did a very good job with the flow and the picture on.the poem for the effect, well done

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I like this poem I like the picture as well very well written I really enjoyed reading it I hope you do well in the contest thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Xelmyrion

Average

I'm not sure if it was the picture that threw me or just the use of the word "dragon" here. The two (for me) do not seem to relate.

Setting that aside, I really liked the rest of it. If there is a suggestion I would make it'd be to revisit the choice of pictures.

If I set the picture aside, the piece is really quite good.

Xel

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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Thanks for taking time to read and review. Elaine

Comment from guinea

Excellent

Nice poem. I think a child would like this also. I enjoyed it. The imagery is great. Shows deep thinking. I love the artwork. your words flow nicely.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

Well this is a natural for someone with your pen-name my dear! And what a gorgeous art piece you chose to complement your sweet 5-7-5 love vignette! :) Best wishes, Sharyn

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine