Steve's Poems for Kids
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Grampa says"A collection of my children's poems
21 total reviews
Comment from sweetthanesue
great rhyming scheme and well flowing with a catchy rhythm
sense of humour
tis true what grandpa says, my how things have changed....
enjoyed the read, suitable for adults and children alike
nice light hearted write...
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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great rhyming scheme and well flowing with a catchy rhythm
sense of humour
tis true what grandpa says, my how things have changed....
enjoyed the read, suitable for adults and children alike
nice light hearted write...
Comment Written 15-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Grampa says, 'Thank you.'
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Steve,
Your skill in execution is as good as one gets and the "Grampa" repetition is truly indicative of a small child's speech pattern. As a Great Grampa, I fully endorse the veracity of his statements. We are NEVER wrong.
Reg
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Dear Steve,
Your skill in execution is as good as one gets and the "Grampa" repetition is truly indicative of a small child's speech pattern. As a Great Grampa, I fully endorse the veracity of his statements. We are NEVER wrong.
Reg
Comment Written 14-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Grampa says, 'Thank you.'
Comment from elliejean
Grandpa was a smart man. He seen how man trashed the earth. Many things of nature were killed. He is letting his grandson know there is a better way. Great work,.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Grandpa was a smart man. He seen how man trashed the earth. Many things of nature were killed. He is letting his grandson know there is a better way. Great work,.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Grampa says, 'Thank you.'
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
You've written a beautiful appropriate poem Steveh. Even your presentation was especially suitable for children. The rhythm was good with a catchy 'tune' for kids. Giddy
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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You've written a beautiful appropriate poem Steveh. Even your presentation was especially suitable for children. The rhythm was good with a catchy 'tune' for kids. Giddy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Grampa says, 'Thank you.'
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I liked this a stark reminder what is happening to our planet through the eyes of grandpa and the child well I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Yes I liked this a stark reminder what is happening to our planet through the eyes of grandpa and the child well I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 14-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Grampa says, 'Thank you.'
Comment from dmt1967
This is a very good poem I like it very much I like the bit about trashing this planet and then moving on to mars I like that very much thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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This is a very good poem I like it very much I like the bit about trashing this planet and then moving on to mars I like that very much thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 14-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Grampa says, 'Thank you.'
Comment from fairy77
That was excellent.Grandpa says is so cute and original.I liked trash our mother earth and goey green.You did great good luck in contest:)beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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That was excellent.Grandpa says is so cute and original.I liked trash our mother earth and goey green.You did great good luck in contest:)beth fairy77.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Grampa says, 'Thank you.'
Comment from cvcopac
I think you consulted the crystal ball on this one--you know, you could be right, there's a lot of litter out that way now. The kids'll love it. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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I think you consulted the crystal ball on this one--you know, you could be right, there's a lot of litter out that way now. The kids'll love it. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Grampa says, 'Thank you.'
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! This sure is a powerful one! It's actually humorous in its exaggeration, altho many would say that's a good thing. Scare the kids! Then they'll be more careful than we were! :)
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Wow! This sure is a powerful one! It's actually humorous in its exaggeration, altho many would say that's a good thing. Scare the kids! Then they'll be more careful than we were! :)
Comment Written 14-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Grampa says, 'Thank you.'
Comment from Cornelius2000
Nice job with this anti-polution poem for kids, and here's hoping some of them will take it to heart. The meter is perfect and so is the rhyming....and it's written in a way that should be appealing to kids....and i loved the picture.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Nice job with this anti-polution poem for kids, and here's hoping some of them will take it to heart. The meter is perfect and so is the rhyming....and it's written in a way that should be appealing to kids....and i loved the picture.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Grampa says, 'Thank you.'