The Pollution Solution
Kids` Pollution Theme Poem10 total reviews
Comment from Christina 201
This is a clear message for all of us not just children.
As poetry it flows well and rhythm and rhyme are good. Children enjoy stories and poems that are based on real characters with things happening to them rather than just being told what they should and shouldn't do.
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This is a clear message for all of us not just children.
As poetry it flows well and rhythm and rhyme are good. Children enjoy stories and poems that are based on real characters with things happening to them rather than just being told what they should and shouldn't do.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
Comment from DALLAS01
I really enjoyed this poem geared to our youth, adults could also profit by reading it. It was informative, without being preachy. It was entertaining as well as motivational.
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I really enjoyed this poem geared to our youth, adults could also profit by reading it. It was informative, without being preachy. It was entertaining as well as motivational.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2012
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem.. I love the theme. Don't pollute. Pick up others waste. We get used to seeing the trash on the ground. We can get used to not seeing any trash. Great work.
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I love the picture. I love the poem.. I love the theme. Don't pollute. Pick up others waste. We get used to seeing the trash on the ground. We can get used to not seeing any trash. Great work.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2012
Comment from cce29
Perfect title and photo for your poem. I agree with yu 100%!! It's not too late, and people need to start changing how they waste things, think about if they're recyclable, or reusable to some one else. My family does as much as it can to reverse the pollution problems. I wish you luck in the contest and look forward to reading even more of your work
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Perfect title and photo for your poem. I agree with yu 100%!! It's not too late, and people need to start changing how they waste things, think about if they're recyclable, or reusable to some one else. My family does as much as it can to reverse the pollution problems. I wish you luck in the contest and look forward to reading even more of your work
Comment Written 14-Sep-2012
Comment from adewpearl
I love your rhyming title
solid use of rhyming couplets
and I like the strong, steady beat of your lines
good alliteration in sensible solution
I like that you offer advice on how children can help out in ways kids actually can contribute
Brooke :-)
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I love your rhyming title
solid use of rhyming couplets
and I like the strong, steady beat of your lines
good alliteration in sensible solution
I like that you offer advice on how children can help out in ways kids actually can contribute
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 14-Sep-2012
Comment from vfbryant
OK- I'm toast. I entered, but I'm pretty sure you've "done yourself proud" with this one. Great job with everything--rhyme, meter, and subject matter. :)
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OK- I'm toast. I entered, but I'm pretty sure you've "done yourself proud" with this one. Great job with everything--rhyme, meter, and subject matter. :)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
Comment from Maureen's Pen
I loved the lyrical quality of this one my friend.
It holds a deeper awareness of the environment for kids to attach too. Great job and a great submission.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Maureen
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I loved the lyrical quality of this one my friend.
It holds a deeper awareness of the environment for kids to attach too. Great job and a great submission.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Maureen
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is everything the contest has asked for, you have good rhyme, easy nice flow that children appreciate. I especially like the way you have shown children how easy it is to be careful where you leave your rubbish, and how it can be useful is disposed of correctly. Good luck in the contest. Sandra. xsx
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This is everything the contest has asked for, you have good rhyme, easy nice flow that children appreciate. I especially like the way you have shown children how easy it is to be careful where you leave your rubbish, and how it can be useful is disposed of correctly. Good luck in the contest. Sandra. xsx
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
Comment from Joy Graham
This is very catchy with a fun rhythm to it. I can almost see someone doing this rap style :) Your rhymes are very good too! Best wishes to you in this contest!
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This is very catchy with a fun rhythm to it. I can almost see someone doing this rap style :) Your rhymes are very good too! Best wishes to you in this contest!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Thanks very much for entering, my friend.
Excellent entry and message to kids.
Lots of imagery of nasty things left lying around, and an added bonus that you advise kids not only to be careful with their own litter, but to pick up and dispose of others' too.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
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Thanks very much for entering, my friend.
Excellent entry and message to kids.
Lots of imagery of nasty things left lying around, and an added bonus that you advise kids not only to be careful with their own litter, but to pick up and dispose of others' too.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012