A Miracle
Incredible journeys of hummingbirds33 total reviews
Comment from missy98writer
Susan,
this is an outstanding piece, but I'm not allowed to give you one, Evil Eddie only allowing me a five. Your descriptive writing is excellent in this piece. Your imagery is fantastic in your piece. You've effectively employed the writing devices of alliteration and metaphor. I liked your many phrases: "light glimmered on the horizon and she shook herself, The chill of the night began to wane as the sun glinted over the hills and its rays wiped the sleep from the eyes of the earth, Fall was here, the chill settled over the land, a blanket of cool that told the little hummer it was time to feed for her coming journey and peering out across the Indiana skies." I loved this piece. Your final two lines hit me profoundly: "She went out in to the wind. Out to find her destiny." I love you and you are a top notch writer. I'd recommend you piece to other reviewers. Have a fabulous day, my friend. Peace out...Melissa.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2011
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Susan,
this is an outstanding piece, but I'm not allowed to give you one, Evil Eddie only allowing me a five. Your descriptive writing is excellent in this piece. Your imagery is fantastic in your piece. You've effectively employed the writing devices of alliteration and metaphor. I liked your many phrases: "light glimmered on the horizon and she shook herself, The chill of the night began to wane as the sun glinted over the hills and its rays wiped the sleep from the eyes of the earth, Fall was here, the chill settled over the land, a blanket of cool that told the little hummer it was time to feed for her coming journey and peering out across the Indiana skies." I loved this piece. Your final two lines hit me profoundly: "She went out in to the wind. Out to find her destiny." I love you and you are a top notch writer. I'd recommend you piece to other reviewers. Have a fabulous day, my friend. Peace out...Melissa.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2011
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Melissa! Hi! It's the thought that counts...I am just happy you like this! I saw a little female three days ago...I sure hope she makes it to the warmth...God love them. I appreciate these great reviews Missy...you are a good friend...xoxo. susan
Comment from Darla9
I love hummingbirds, I agree that they are the most beautiful little birds. This was an enchanting story with beautiful descriptions. I really enjoyed it, well done.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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I love hummingbirds, I agree that they are the most beautiful little birds. This was an enchanting story with beautiful descriptions. I really enjoyed it, well done.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
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OH me too! My little favorites! I am thrilled you liked this and I do apologize for this late reply too! "/ Thank you Darla!! xoxo, susan
Comment from BethShelby
I've been trying to find out lately when hummingbirds go South. Mine are still around although I expected the to be gone by now. I think it won't be long. I loved your little nature story. I was surprised that a preying mantis woud attact a tree frog and had to look that up. You're right. The bigger one would. Nice writing.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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I've been trying to find out lately when hummingbirds go South. Mine are still around although I expected the to be gone by now. I think it won't be long. I loved your little nature story. I was surprised that a preying mantis woud attact a tree frog and had to look that up. You're right. The bigger one would. Nice writing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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Thank you Beth! It's going to be a long cold winter...I think! HEY! If you can, go to YouTube and click on "Boy and Hummingbird", if I haven't already mentioned it?? I promise you will love it! Susan
Comment from Minglement
I loved your story of the nature of things. I don't know anyone but your and I who would write about insects and their battles LOL. Do you remember if you read my 'Balance of Nature' story about a 'vinegaroon' and a 'wiley' scorpion? This was beautifully written and I loved how you introduced us to the mantis through the flight of the hummingbird and then came back to it in the end. I'll miss them too. I took a great photo of hummingbird in the snow drinking nectar from a rosemary plant.
I always know when I settle in to read one of your stories, I'm in for a treat! Thanks for sharing friend. Marcia
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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I loved your story of the nature of things. I don't know anyone but your and I who would write about insects and their battles LOL. Do you remember if you read my 'Balance of Nature' story about a 'vinegaroon' and a 'wiley' scorpion? This was beautifully written and I loved how you introduced us to the mantis through the flight of the hummingbird and then came back to it in the end. I'll miss them too. I took a great photo of hummingbird in the snow drinking nectar from a rosemary plant.
I always know when I settle in to read one of your stories, I'm in for a treat! Thanks for sharing friend. Marcia
Comment Written 30-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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Thank you Marcia...your kindness means a lot to me...Down your way, they may stay a bit longer? I'm not sure? But, I know this much, this winter is going to be a long cold one. I bet. BUT hope not! I haven't felt well, I do hope you forgive me not reading much lately....I am so tired I can barely get out of bed anymore. HUGS young lady...my heart is in Tenn. ")) Susan
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I'm sorry you've not been feeling well, dear friend. I've suffered from lack of energy myself. And motivation. It comes in spurts. Maybe it's 'old age' LOL (in my case). I'll keep you in my prayers and hope you'll be feeling better. I hope it's not a long cold winter. I'll definitely be more wary of the ice this winter! No more falls! You be careful too! Take care and write (and read) when you feel up to it. Hugs, Marcia
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My picture of the hummingbird in the snow was in So. California high desert. I thought I answered this but maybe it didn't 'save'. Your no. one priority is taking care of yourself, so of course, do that first :) I do miss you when you're not around, but of course I understand. Take care and hugs, back - Marcia
Comment from sasil
I'm always amazed at the precision focus with which you detail your scenes. A bit philosophic and moody, the actions of the animals are well recorded, as though through a photographer's lens. Happy to say I saw a hummingbird in our yard but once this summer---I don't have a feeder (yet), but looking forward to the cardinals and chickadees keeping us company througout the colder months. Watching those small, black and white birds hopping about the branches of our bushes from the kitchen window...
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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I'm always amazed at the precision focus with which you detail your scenes. A bit philosophic and moody, the actions of the animals are well recorded, as though through a photographer's lens. Happy to say I saw a hummingbird in our yard but once this summer---I don't have a feeder (yet), but looking forward to the cardinals and chickadees keeping us company througout the colder months. Watching those small, black and white birds hopping about the branches of our bushes from the kitchen window...
Comment Written 29-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2011
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Dearest Sassie...you are such a faithful and kind reviewer for me...I always appreciate it, you always make me feel worthwhile...thank you so....xoxo, susan
Comment from Denise S
Bird watching is so interesting. There is so much to learn from them. Great life lessons I think. I enjoyed reading your story, it was nicely done
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Bird watching is so interesting. There is so much to learn from them. Great life lessons I think. I enjoyed reading your story, it was nicely done
Comment Written 29-Sep-2011
Comment from Carrie Smith
This is a wonderful poem about those busy little humming birds-now you see them now you don't. As usual, my friend, you draw us into your stories with imagery that put us right there watching the whole scenario. Loved the part about the mantis and frog! Cleaver. Luv..Susan
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This is a wonderful poem about those busy little humming birds-now you see them now you don't. As usual, my friend, you draw us into your stories with imagery that put us right there watching the whole scenario. Loved the part about the mantis and frog! Cleaver. Luv..Susan
Comment Written 29-Sep-2011
Comment from Judian James
I wish I had a sixer for you Sue. This is superb writing.
I did wince at the tiny frog being munched on ... ouch. I came across a mantis once eating a grasshopper and I actually saw a monarch butterfly come out of its crysallis!
Anyway, "The chill of the night began to wane as the sun glinted over the hills and its rays wiped the sleep from the eyes of the earth" so beautiful!!! (go into YouTube and type in Boy and Hummingbird ... then find the "movie" that is around 3 minutes long and plays the song, "Better Together" ... it will make you cry, it's so precious!)
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2011
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I wish I had a sixer for you Sue. This is superb writing.
I did wince at the tiny frog being munched on ... ouch. I came across a mantis once eating a grasshopper and I actually saw a monarch butterfly come out of its crysallis!
Anyway, "The chill of the night began to wane as the sun glinted over the hills and its rays wiped the sleep from the eyes of the earth" so beautiful!!! (go into YouTube and type in Boy and Hummingbird ... then find the "movie" that is around 3 minutes long and plays the song, "Better Together" ... it will make you cry, it's so precious!)
Comment Written 29-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2011
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OH, neat! I will do that this evening? Thank you Judian...it's a pleasure each time you review for me! HUG! Susan
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My pleasure Sue. Let me know after you see the video!!
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OH THANK YOU , THANK YOU JUDE! I had to watch it three times! JUST beautiful...this is the first time I have REALLY smiled in months. JUST joyful...I did have tears well up from just pure joy...I had almost forgotten that feeling. Oh thank you again...xoxo...suse
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Hey Suse. I have the link on my desktop and watch it almost daily.
Isn't the end when he's sleeping on the couch and his buddy is waiting his hand the dearest thing you've ever seen? I KNEW you'd love it. Thanks for letting me know. Love, Jude
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
Good write with imagery, Hi Susan A good write and good flow. The subject has a good imagery. I enjoyed reading your book. Thanks for sharing.
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Good write with imagery, Hi Susan A good write and good flow. The subject has a good imagery. I enjoyed reading your book. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2011
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a lovely story. I saw a hummingbird in my morning glories the other day. It is the first on I have seen in years. Do they really fly to Brazil??? Love you!!! Debbie
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This is a lovely story. I saw a hummingbird in my morning glories the other day. It is the first on I have seen in years. Do they really fly to Brazil??? Love you!!! Debbie
Comment Written 29-Sep-2011