His Pink Fluffy Bunny.
A Long story about a babies visit from God.4 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a poignant story as a tribute to a little fighter, The Pink Fluffy Bunny was very important to this report of the evolution of faith. I am sad that things did not develop in the direction that felt the most fruitful and hopeful. I'm sending healing to you for all the pain you still carry.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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This is a poignant story as a tribute to a little fighter, The Pink Fluffy Bunny was very important to this report of the evolution of faith. I am sad that things did not develop in the direction that felt the most fruitful and hopeful. I'm sending healing to you for all the pain you still carry.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thanks Liz.
This would go good in my new book, "Think Pink"
Doctor Ricky1024
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cool. I'm glad I could affirm a chapter for your new book.
Comment from /*Twinkle
I like how this was written in stanzas. It makes it easy to read. Also the words are so perfectly chosen. Ending feeds anticipation about what will happen next.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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I like how this was written in stanzas. It makes it easy to read. Also the words are so perfectly chosen. Ending feeds anticipation about what will happen next.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Hi twinkle,it,s done
I hope you enjoy it!
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Twinkle thank you.If you like the bunny try these.Also based on true subjects.
#1-Jason"s Ladder
#2- "Eternal Angelic Love"
#3-"The Soul Toucher"
Thanks Ricky1024poet/
writer/artist/prophet/
High Mormon Priest.
Comment from writerwish
The poetry is done very well. I enjoyed rhyming. I liked the message too. It was very deep and spiritual. It shows how God makes all kinds of people and not all for the same purpose.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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The poetry is done very well. I enjoyed rhyming. I liked the message too. It was very deep and spiritual. It shows how God makes all kinds of people and not all for the same purpose.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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writerwish, I'm glad you appreciate the message!
It's a vision first, then I cook it in my oven.
Lastly I serve it with white wine of course!
Comment from manicblue
I was really puzzled by this. The title says "His Pink Bunny" and is supposed to be told from a child's point of view or about a child. Then there was the first sentence saying it's a story/poem. Usually these types of comments are put in the Author's Notes area.
I can only think that you are reserving a spot in this contest and will write your story later? So sorry, but this is what I perceived from what I read.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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I was really puzzled by this. The title says "His Pink Bunny" and is supposed to be told from a child's point of view or about a child. Then there was the first sentence saying it's a story/poem. Usually these types of comments are put in the Author's Notes area.
I can only think that you are reserving a spot in this contest and will write your story later? So sorry, but this is what I perceived from what I read.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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dear manic, Shes finished now. I think you'll enjoy it's message now. Thanks.
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I promise to read this again later. Time for bed now! Take care. :)