Another Pretty Face
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Comment from redman6650e
I enjoyed the read. The setting was nice and the interaction of the characters gave me feel for their personalities. I can relate to the story of the Mom starting to date and her daughter being jealous, I have seen this situation play out in real life before.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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I enjoyed the read. The setting was nice and the interaction of the characters gave me feel for their personalities. I can relate to the story of the Mom starting to date and her daughter being jealous, I have seen this situation play out in real life before.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
I have been on holiday for a short time so have only just found out about your illness. Needless to say, you will be in my prayers.
I like how Sara and Joe's relationship is continueing to develop and Joe's protective attitude towards both Sara and Cassie. Just what every girl needs - to be loved, protected and admired!
Juliette
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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I have been on holiday for a short time so have only just found out about your illness. Needless to say, you will be in my prayers.
I like how Sara and Joe's relationship is continueing to develop and Joe's protective attitude towards both Sara and Cassie. Just what every girl needs - to be loved, protected and admired!
Juliette
Comment Written 18-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your prayers. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
You are such a natural,
Barbara - your writing so
true-to-life, which draws
the reader in right away...
a most enjoyable chapter.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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You are such a natural,
Barbara - your writing so
true-to-life, which draws
the reader in right away...
a most enjoyable chapter.
Margaret.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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Coming from you this is very high praise, thank you.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara.wilkey:
my daughter played softball and loved (loves)
that sport over all others which is one of the
reasons I was drawn to this story -- I will go back
and read the other chapters but likely will not
review them
I will also add you to my prayer list as you battle
your cancer -- I am inspired by your spirit
love,
jan
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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barbara.wilkey:
my daughter played softball and loved (loves)
that sport over all others which is one of the
reasons I was drawn to this story -- I will go back
and read the other chapters but likely will not
review them
I will also add you to my prayer list as you battle
your cancer -- I am inspired by your spirit
love,
jan
Comment Written 18-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your prayers. I appreciate your kind review. I am sorry my previous posts do not reward bonus points.
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that is not a problem -- love, jan
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Great chapter Barbara! As always... Love keeps growing between Joe and Sara, you're doing a beautiful job in this story. I'm praying for you Barbara, please, stay strong and and positive all the time. We love you and wish you the best...
God bless you dear friend,
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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Great chapter Barbara! As always... Love keeps growing between Joe and Sara, you're doing a beautiful job in this story. I'm praying for you Barbara, please, stay strong and and positive all the time. We love you and wish you the best...
God bless you dear friend,
Comment Written 18-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your prayers. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Jonez08
Hi Barbara, wonderful chapter. I loved the outing and humor. Seems Sara is truly in love and it's taking over, such a sweet romance. I always enjoy these two. I'm very curious to know why Joe doesn't think he'll ever understand Cassie. Take care, I look forward to the next
Besides(,) if you don't hurry, you'll be late for your game."
"She's a great kid, but I don't think I'll ever understand her."
(I never knew he felt this way, did I miss something?)
took a few steps toward her bedroom, then turned around and ran to Joe.
(Wow! great job showing emotions without telling)
Cassandra
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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Hi Barbara, wonderful chapter. I loved the outing and humor. Seems Sara is truly in love and it's taking over, such a sweet romance. I always enjoy these two. I'm very curious to know why Joe doesn't think he'll ever understand Cassie. Take care, I look forward to the next
Besides(,) if you don't hurry, you'll be late for your game."
"She's a great kid, but I don't think I'll ever understand her."
(I never knew he felt this way, did I miss something?)
took a few steps toward her bedroom, then turned around and ran to Joe.
(Wow! great job showing emotions without telling)
Cassandra
Comment Written 18-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from lucyanne1977
a good read. I haven't read the begining at the moment but what i have read was easy to read and enjoyable. I will be reading the rest soon . keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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a good read. I haven't read the begining at the moment but what i have read was easy to read and enjoyable. I will be reading the rest soon . keep up the good work.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from anabelle
What a lovely chapter, Barbara. I really enjoy these two's love story. It's sweet, innocent and real.
I wish you the very best with your upcoming difficult times. I'm glad you have your writing, friends, and I hope family to surround you with their love and support.
We'll be saying a prayer for you.
Kind regards, anabelle
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
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What a lovely chapter, Barbara. I really enjoy these two's love story. It's sweet, innocent and real.
I wish you the very best with your upcoming difficult times. I'm glad you have your writing, friends, and I hope family to surround you with their love and support.
We'll be saying a prayer for you.
Kind regards, anabelle
Comment Written 17-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your continued prayers. I appreciate your kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Take care.
Comment from Bryana
I remember those days of īports and cookie sales when my sons were small. Since I didn't know much about the sports rules I used to wait until the fans of our team started to clap for me to do the same.
I'm sorry I haven't read other chapters but this was very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
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I remember those days of īports and cookie sales when my sons were small. Since I didn't know much about the sports rules I used to wait until the fans of our team started to clap for me to do the same.
I'm sorry I haven't read other chapters but this was very enjoyable.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
This is the first chapter of your book that I have read and it is both well written and full of enthusiasm, which is something I specially like in writing.
There is just one small change to suggest ...
* You have - Go change or do whatever ... I suggest -
Go and change or do whatever ...
The greatest impact of your writing here is what is in your Notes - that you are fighting Cancer and due to go for Chemo-therapy next month. I am so sorry about this and you will certainly be included in my prayers.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
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Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
This is the first chapter of your book that I have read and it is both well written and full of enthusiasm, which is something I specially like in writing.
There is just one small change to suggest ...
* You have - Go change or do whatever ... I suggest -
Go and change or do whatever ...
The greatest impact of your writing here is what is in your Notes - that you are fighting Cancer and due to go for Chemo-therapy next month. I am so sorry about this and you will certainly be included in my prayers.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your prayers. I appreciate your kind review.