Reigniting Your Flame of Youth
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Comment from gabriowl
This is not weird at all... or rather, it is weird, but I MUCH prefer that to normal! You make many good points again here, and I love the descriptions of your meditations. Especially the sound. Resonance. I think what you're hearing is your own personal frequency. I hear my own too, as well as practice overtone singing to help tune up the sound. I just love to think about how each of our cells is a tiny battery filled mostly with water, and it's projecting electric frequency, with a specific vibration. Awesome and awe-inspiring, indeed!
One technical note:
"It will also, change the way you look at life." I don't think the comma is necessary. It will speak more directly to the reader as a unified sentence.
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This is not weird at all... or rather, it is weird, but I MUCH prefer that to normal! You make many good points again here, and I love the descriptions of your meditations. Especially the sound. Resonance. I think what you're hearing is your own personal frequency. I hear my own too, as well as practice overtone singing to help tune up the sound. I just love to think about how each of our cells is a tiny battery filled mostly with water, and it's projecting electric frequency, with a specific vibration. Awesome and awe-inspiring, indeed!
One technical note:
"It will also, change the way you look at life." I don't think the comma is necessary. It will speak more directly to the reader as a unified sentence.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
Comment from Changeisgood
Knowledge, Wonderful. I already meditate and have had the fortune of hearing the Om for short periods. It sounds like the Om, the sound behind all creation. You've inspired me to keep at it. I've found I can be more peaceful during crisis by meditating once a day. I have a special room for meditation. Various aspects of your life do come under a different, ah, appreciation. It is getting acquainted with yourself. It is strange how our culture, most cultures, ignore the inner self in favor of distractions. So, beginners have to just stick with it. I think this was the best peice about health you've so far
w ritten. Franny
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Knowledge, Wonderful. I already meditate and have had the fortune of hearing the Om for short periods. It sounds like the Om, the sound behind all creation. You've inspired me to keep at it. I've found I can be more peaceful during crisis by meditating once a day. I have a special room for meditation. Various aspects of your life do come under a different, ah, appreciation. It is getting acquainted with yourself. It is strange how our culture, most cultures, ignore the inner self in favor of distractions. So, beginners have to just stick with it. I think this was the best peice about health you've so far
w ritten. Franny
Comment Written 16-Jul-2010
Comment from missy98writer
knowledge,
Your non fiction chapter is very well written. Excellent narrative and very descriptive writing. Here are some examples of your descriptive writing:
This happens as you begin aligning yourself up with the universe and its life forces. This is not just imagination, it is a fact. You will become sensitive to the vibrations, the life emanations of life and things around you. As you become aware of this, you may start to see the aura of life that flows around and from all things, whether physical objects, or living things, such as plants, animals, or people. You may start hearing things that others can not hear. You may see things that others can not see. You may feel actual vibrations that others can not feel. This is a natural process as you progress in Reigniting Your Flame of Youth.
During my meditation, and now in my before sleep state, I see colored clouds and lights. Sometimes they are soft and at other times they are flashing. This can happen even with my eyes open, but usually with my eyes closed. Sometimes, I see little brilliant white stars whirling in the sky, or behind my closed eye lids. At times I have sensations of floating and leaving my body while I am meditating or resting. I never have trouble going to sleep. This is not frightening, it is rather calming. I am not a medium; I don't converse with or see spirits around me. Yet, all this has no affect upon my scheduled daily life. I will tell you more about my experiences as we go along.
Cool art work sets off you wonderful ideas in this non-fiction piece. . .Melissa!
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knowledge,
Your non fiction chapter is very well written. Excellent narrative and very descriptive writing. Here are some examples of your descriptive writing:
This happens as you begin aligning yourself up with the universe and its life forces. This is not just imagination, it is a fact. You will become sensitive to the vibrations, the life emanations of life and things around you. As you become aware of this, you may start to see the aura of life that flows around and from all things, whether physical objects, or living things, such as plants, animals, or people. You may start hearing things that others can not hear. You may see things that others can not see. You may feel actual vibrations that others can not feel. This is a natural process as you progress in Reigniting Your Flame of Youth.
During my meditation, and now in my before sleep state, I see colored clouds and lights. Sometimes they are soft and at other times they are flashing. This can happen even with my eyes open, but usually with my eyes closed. Sometimes, I see little brilliant white stars whirling in the sky, or behind my closed eye lids. At times I have sensations of floating and leaving my body while I am meditating or resting. I never have trouble going to sleep. This is not frightening, it is rather calming. I am not a medium; I don't converse with or see spirits around me. Yet, all this has no affect upon my scheduled daily life. I will tell you more about my experiences as we go along.
Cool art work sets off you wonderful ideas in this non-fiction piece. . .Melissa!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2010
Comment from wierdgrace
I was locked out for a day, but now I am back, just an error, so I will catch up for now, this is great, I read some of my grandmothers stories, and how she and her Grandmother were mediums, It was great to read. This is great, thankyou, and the picture is awesome
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I was locked out for a day, but now I am back, just an error, so I will catch up for now, this is great, I read some of my grandmothers stories, and how she and her Grandmother were mediums, It was great to read. This is great, thankyou, and the picture is awesome
Comment Written 15-Jul-2010
Comment from c_lucas
Your level of self awareness depends upon your level of enlightenment. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for and easy read.
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Your level of self awareness depends upon your level of enlightenment. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for and easy read.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2010
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am excited about your future chapters. My guys already think I little strange, so why let them be really worried about. Seriously, I am looking forward to your next post.
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I am excited about your future chapters. My guys already think I little strange, so why let them be really worried about. Seriously, I am looking forward to your next post.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2010