Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "This fellow's on the Square"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Kingsland
This was a really well written piece of poetic art with very good rhythm in its poetic voice. I enjoyed every word of this well fashioned piece of poetic art. It was just a pleasure to have written a review for... John
reply by the author on 29-May-2010
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This was a really well written piece of poetic art with very good rhythm in its poetic voice. I enjoyed every word of this well fashioned piece of poetic art. It was just a pleasure to have written a review for... John
Comment Written 29-May-2010
reply by the author on 29-May-2010
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thank you John
Comment from Abba Lin
hi deepwater.. Enjoyed your work... This is a hard one for me to write on.. I have studied the free masons and believe the history of them is satanic.. wont go any further.. But your style is great.. Love Lin
reply by the author on 29-May-2010
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hi deepwater.. Enjoyed your work... This is a hard one for me to write on.. I have studied the free masons and believe the history of them is satanic.. wont go any further.. But your style is great.. Love Lin
Comment Written 28-May-2010
reply by the author on 29-May-2010
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thanks Lin
Comment from Gideon Roth
Great job on this. You may know well the signs and tokens and no doubt are on the level when sharing your thoughts with your well written poetry. This one should do well and receive great reviews...Gideon
reply by the author on 28-May-2010
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Great job on this. You may know well the signs and tokens and no doubt are on the level when sharing your thoughts with your well written poetry. This one should do well and receive great reviews...Gideon
Comment Written 28-May-2010
reply by the author on 28-May-2010
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thank you Gideon
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Ah,spoken like a down-to-earth, no-frills- Mason! I feel there will be many great things said about you, when that time comes. I'm just glad that you shared so much of 'you' with 'us'. Thanks so much, Betty
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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Ah,spoken like a down-to-earth, no-frills- Mason! I feel there will be many great things said about you, when that time comes. I'm just glad that you shared so much of 'you' with 'us'. Thanks so much, Betty
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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your most welcome Betty
Comment from Wendyanne
What a simple epitaph deepwater. I doubt that you will have something as simple as that when the time comes as I think people will have more to say about you than that, ie, an excellent poet!
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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What a simple epitaph deepwater. I doubt that you will have something as simple as that when the time comes as I think people will have more to say about you than that, ie, an excellent poet!
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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well thank you somuch Wendy for reading
Comment from Black-Saphire
Yet another wonderful melancholy poem that i like. I especially liked:
Pick out no single deed of mine
If such a deed there be
You really drew me in with your choices of words and i was caught begging for more by the time it was over. You are an excellent writer--Keep it up,
-Jade
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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Yet another wonderful melancholy poem that i like. I especially liked:
Pick out no single deed of mine
If such a deed there be
You really drew me in with your choices of words and i was caught begging for more by the time it was over. You are an excellent writer--Keep it up,
-Jade
Comment Written 27-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thank you Jade
Comment from wholechild
How wonderful to know your values plain and hope that others will recognize it too. The phase "This fellow's on the Square" is such a down to earth way of saying he was honest and told the truth. No fancy recognition or awards, just plain honest. The rhyme, meter and flow work perfectly.
Shannon
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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How wonderful to know your values plain and hope that others will recognize it too. The phase "This fellow's on the Square" is such a down to earth way of saying he was honest and told the truth. No fancy recognition or awards, just plain honest. The rhyme, meter and flow work perfectly.
Shannon
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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thank you Shannon
Comment from Awatef
This is very well written poem. I see nothing wrong in your writing. Great job and well done. It gives a nice and contented feeling to the reader.
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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This is very well written poem. I see nothing wrong in your writing. Great job and well done. It gives a nice and contented feeling to the reader.
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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thank you Awatef for reading this GW
Comment from Earthwriter
very nicely penned my friend such a secret societry so well portrayed and made famous by some recent movies very nicely presented well done
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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very nicely penned my friend such a secret societry so well portrayed and made famous by some recent movies very nicely presented well done
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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thank you Earthwriter
Comment from FredCollingwood
I think a good brief epitath would be something like: "I told you I was sick." I like your poem, bu tthen again, I've liked all you have posted.
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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I think a good brief epitath would be something like: "I told you I was sick." I like your poem, bu tthen again, I've liked all you have posted.
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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thank you Fred and thanks for the nice comment my friend Gary