Contest Entry and Winners
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "When You Least Expect It"Short Stories
46 total reviews
Comment from anabelle
This is a really good story, Carol. Congratulations on the win. Well-deserved.
You're right, heroes do come in all shapes, sizes and genders.
Congatulations again and thanks for sharing this lovely moment.
Regards, anabelle
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2010
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This is a really good story, Carol. Congratulations on the win. Well-deserved.
You're right, heroes do come in all shapes, sizes and genders.
Congatulations again and thanks for sharing this lovely moment.
Regards, anabelle
Comment Written 05-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2010
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anabelle,
Thank you so much for reading Johnny's story...it means everything to me. Smiles, Carol
Comment from --Turtle.
This was a really good piece. I enjoyed reading and still remember reading the story of that from many months ago. This flowed really well.
good job, though I feel like I'm reading it late, I really liked it.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2010
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This was a really good piece. I enjoyed reading and still remember reading the story of that from many months ago. This flowed really well.
good job, though I feel like I'm reading it late, I really liked it.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2010
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turtle,
Thank you so much for the awesome review..regardless when you read it! I was feeling down and needed to remind myself of my blessings. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Vladilynn
Ohhhhhhhhhhh!!! You've brought me to the scene of this prose! No wonder you're leading the ranking votes. No doubt for this one. It's a very touching piece!
Thankyou for sharing,
Love much
Lynn:0)
Good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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Ohhhhhhhhhhh!!! You've brought me to the scene of this prose! No wonder you're leading the ranking votes. No doubt for this one. It's a very touching piece!
Thankyou for sharing,
Love much
Lynn:0)
Good luck!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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Lynn,
I am very fortunate to have my son. He is a special young man with a heart of gold...The brain damage keeps him at a younger age but his heart is bigger than any I know. Smiles to you, Carol
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ohhhh..i wonder why its a great poem!! Of course it's coming from you!!!!:0)
I bet he is, because you're the best mom, that's why!!:0)
Comment from Amfunny
I loved your story. It was so nice to read and review. This is a great story of your son and of survival. Very nicely written. Looks like a winner to me.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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I loved your story. It was so nice to read and review. This is a great story of your son and of survival. Very nicely written. Looks like a winner to me.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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NOrna,
Thank you so much for your kind review. I was truly blessed with my son. Smiles to you, CArol
Comment from Agrona
What a moving and inspirational story. I had tears in my eyes, because I could feel your fear and desperation. I am so glad this story had a happy ending. Your son is a true fighter and a hero. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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What a moving and inspirational story. I had tears in my eyes, because I could feel your fear and desperation. I am so glad this story had a happy ending. Your son is a true fighter and a hero. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Agrona,
I was nineteen and terrified. God blessed John and myself that day. He is a special son ...suffering from brain damage but sharing a heart of gold. Smiles to you....
Comment from toni guerrero
You wrote a very nice and emotional poem.Good beganning and dramatic ending. Good story. I would recommend this poem to others to read. Good luck.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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You wrote a very nice and emotional poem.Good beganning and dramatic ending. Good story. I would recommend this poem to others to read. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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toni,
Thank you very much for reading my story about my son. I was blessed the day God gave him back to me...Sure he suffers from brain damage but his heart is pure gold. Smiles to you....
Comment from BethShelby
Wow! What an inspirational story. You hero is your son who fought so hard against all odds and made it through the surgury but I think the doctor who did this operation is also a hero.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Wow! What an inspirational story. You hero is your son who fought so hard against all odds and made it through the surgury but I think the doctor who did this operation is also a hero.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Beth,
He is a special young man with a heart of gold...Maybe he has brain damage, but he's kinder than those who don't...Smiles to you
Comment from warbler
This is a lovely story about strength and courage. I enjoyed reading it and the last line was just wonderful. Your son heroically helped to save his live. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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This is a lovely story about strength and courage. I enjoyed reading it and the last line was just wonderful. Your son heroically helped to save his live. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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warbler,
He is a special young man with a heart of gold. Thank you for the kind comments. Smiles to you....
Comment from Shirley B
Tears came to my eyes as I read this beautiful story of your wonderful son. The brain is a miracle in itself. I am so glad God was standing by the doctors that day and I know he still is today. Thank you for sharing this heart warming story with us, Shirley
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Tears came to my eyes as I read this beautiful story of your wonderful son. The brain is a miracle in itself. I am so glad God was standing by the doctors that day and I know he still is today. Thank you for sharing this heart warming story with us, Shirley
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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Shirley,
Thank you my dear friend for understanding the emotion behind this story. John is a special young man. He suffers from brain damage but his heart is pure gold. Smiles to you.....
Comment from jkswan
This is a beautifully told story and a wonderful entry for the contest. I'm glad it had a happy ending. I can't believe he could wake up in the operating room and coo like that, amazing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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This is a beautifully told story and a wonderful entry for the contest. I'm glad it had a happy ending. I can't believe he could wake up in the operating room and coo like that, amazing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2010
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jkswan
It was an amazing day...I was 19 and thought I would be planning my son's funeral. God had other plans. He is a special young man, suffering from brain damage, but sharing his heart with all.
Smiles to you....