Life in the ass lane.
a challenge I could not resist.19 total reviews
Comment from P1
is this a contest??? yeah i know
we all get tired of serious and this
was great to come upon and read. you
have done well, love the pic lol
pleasure to read and review hugs lynda.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2008
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is this a contest??? yeah i know
we all get tired of serious and this
was great to come upon and read. you
have done well, love the pic lol
pleasure to read and review hugs lynda.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2008
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Hi Lynda. It was a contest on another site... not here. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment... ZeeZee
Comment from wierdgrace
i could not stop laughing when I first saw the story, it is wonderful. and full of laughter. Yes it is a bit ridiculous, but all of us have to head out to the rediculous, once in a while. great, writing.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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i could not stop laughing when I first saw the story, it is wonderful. and full of laughter. Yes it is a bit ridiculous, but all of us have to head out to the rediculous, once in a while. great, writing.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Why thank you so much.. I did enjoy this bit of a romp. Glad you were not offended. ZeeZee
Comment from wirenut
zeezeewriter,
i got a kick out of the read. saucy little ditty with a bit of a twist at the end... the end, not her end...LOL
if there was spag, I missed, it but right now I gotta go take a cold shower ;-D tee hee hee
c ya
rick
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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zeezeewriter,
i got a kick out of the read. saucy little ditty with a bit of a twist at the end... the end, not her end...LOL
if there was spag, I missed, it but right now I gotta go take a cold shower ;-D tee hee hee
c ya
rick
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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lmao.. rick you are a hoot. Thanks for the reading... and the commenting.. Kisses. ZeeZee
Comment from chaswriter
Zeezee - I am ROFLMAO. That is so ridiculously funny that I scared the dogs with my laughter. Thanks for making my day. Charlie.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Zeezee - I am ROFLMAO. That is so ridiculously funny that I scared the dogs with my laughter. Thanks for making my day. Charlie.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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You are so welcome Charlie. I am glad you found my littler silly funny. Thanks for reading and leaving a most generous review. ZeeZee
Comment from RossJM
... prize winning cucumber, grown in my garden of love ...
I got a kick right on this phrase. The rest of it was quite boring.
Sorry for being honest.
Cheers,
Ross
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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... prize winning cucumber, grown in my garden of love ...
I got a kick right on this phrase. The rest of it was quite boring.
Sorry for being honest.
Cheers,
Ross
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Hello Ross, I love honesty. Thank you for reading and leaving your honest comment. ZeeZee
Comment from ledford
What a hoot! Your wording is too funny:-)
Caught a few SPAG's you may want to check out:
eyes as he watch?s Daphne massage her big ... should be "watches"
at his one handed game of lust. ... compund word. I recommend "one-handed"
life long dream of visiting Branson, Missouri {,} was ... comma needed here {} and I recommend "life-long"
some spin on her performance {,} I feared Albert might ... I recommend a semi-colon here { }
My seasons pride and joy, disappearing ... should be "season's"
Keep it up (pun not intended;-)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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What a hoot! Your wording is too funny:-)
Caught a few SPAG's you may want to check out:
eyes as he watch?s Daphne massage her big ... should be "watches"
at his one handed game of lust. ... compund word. I recommend "one-handed"
life long dream of visiting Branson, Missouri {,} was ... comma needed here {} and I recommend "life-long"
some spin on her performance {,} I feared Albert might ... I recommend a semi-colon here { }
My seasons pride and joy, disappearing ... should be "season's"
Keep it up (pun not intended;-)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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LOL on the last line. Thanks a million. ZeeZee
Comment from Judian James
"Well, I do not bluff, Sir. Nay, I say, as I snapped away with my trusty instamatic camera, cranking out dull, gritty eight by tens of Albert slamming his whammy while checking out my wife. I was radiant with the impressive chronicle of indecent exposure any judge and jury would applaud". I don't know how you come up with this stuff, but as usual, you're hilarious. rude, crude but hilarious!
"How dare she!! My prizing winning cucumber, grown in my garden of love. My seasons pride and joy, disappearing into her bottomless cavern. My heart was heavy and my dick was hard.... wait a minute. My dick was hard.
Albert and I stood together ... alternating. He has the hands of a musician, he never misses a beat"
Yup, hilarious!!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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"Well, I do not bluff, Sir. Nay, I say, as I snapped away with my trusty instamatic camera, cranking out dull, gritty eight by tens of Albert slamming his whammy while checking out my wife. I was radiant with the impressive chronicle of indecent exposure any judge and jury would applaud". I don't know how you come up with this stuff, but as usual, you're hilarious. rude, crude but hilarious!
"How dare she!! My prizing winning cucumber, grown in my garden of love. My seasons pride and joy, disappearing into her bottomless cavern. My heart was heavy and my dick was hard.... wait a minute. My dick was hard.
Albert and I stood together ... alternating. He has the hands of a musician, he never misses a beat"
Yup, hilarious!!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Hey, drugs.. better living through chemistry... thanks Jude.. my precious puppy.
Comment from jeslaf
Yankee doodle with his noodle--great turn of phrase!
take him by his scrawny nut sack--vivid image, it ain't pretty
The surprise ending is HILARIOUS. The short short sentence "My dick was hard." has great comedic effect, as does the last sentence. You are a comedienne extraordinaire, and I look forward to your next installment. This stressed out nation needs a collection of your funny shorts. I personally would like them all in one PUBLISHED book. : )
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Yankee doodle with his noodle--great turn of phrase!
take him by his scrawny nut sack--vivid image, it ain't pretty
The surprise ending is HILARIOUS. The short short sentence "My dick was hard." has great comedic effect, as does the last sentence. You are a comedienne extraordinaire, and I look forward to your next installment. This stressed out nation needs a collection of your funny shorts. I personally would like them all in one PUBLISHED book. : )
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Ahh J.. I needed to bust out with a funny. I was getting to serious. Thanks much. ZeeZee
Comment from Charles Keith
Hi zeezee
I think this is the first time I've caught anything from you (reading wise!)
If this was your break from serious, it certainly was successful. Now I need to go check out serious!
Loved this piece and I think far of ridiculous - there are a lot of off-the-wall people around - who can say what will turn them on?
The writing was great - did you get all the word? dunno I drink too. (but not today)
I am so glad I swore I am unoffendable!
Keith
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Hi zeezee
I think this is the first time I've caught anything from you (reading wise!)
If this was your break from serious, it certainly was successful. Now I need to go check out serious!
Loved this piece and I think far of ridiculous - there are a lot of off-the-wall people around - who can say what will turn them on?
The writing was great - did you get all the word? dunno I drink too. (but not today)
I am so glad I swore I am unoffendable!
Keith
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Hi Keith. I tend to get a bit outrageous, but hopefully never boring. Thanks for reading and commenting. ZeeZee
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outragous ? you have never ben to London's Soho! I worked in a bar there it was ----- interesting
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I like interesting.. interesting is better than HO HUM. We get enough of HO HUM in our lives.
SO HO.. well, I wish I could traipse in an have a few. Drinks and Laughs, that is. ZeeZee
Comment from babylonia
zee,
made me smile. made me laugh. just when he thought he was getting even, he gets a thrill. cool~ LOL easy to read and follow. one small spaggie do i see.
and demand an apology for calling me coward. I am not a coward. (change apologize to apology)
imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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zee,
made me smile. made me laugh. just when he thought he was getting even, he gets a thrill. cool~ LOL easy to read and follow. one small spaggie do i see.
and demand an apology for calling me coward. I am not a coward. (change apologize to apology)
imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Hey Barbara, thanks much honey.. I will go back and fix the apology.. how many time we read and read and still miss the obvious.. jeepers. ZeeZee
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zee,
one little spaggie, no worries. the story is so hilarious when you really think about it. LOL wonder what the neighbors would think seeing two men standing outside whacking away. :P
that would be hilarious.
love,
barbara