Greed
Greed is the destroyer of society27 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I agree. Greed us ugly and c at the root if had things, it's the lack of Empathy. It's the lack of humility. This is an excellent 12 word poem and supportive presentation.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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I agree. Greed us ugly and c at the root if had things, it's the lack of Empathy. It's the lack of humility. This is an excellent 12 word poem and supportive presentation.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your review. Let's, hope that somehow Greed goes away
and we have a happier ways,
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Yes!
Comment from harmony13
In this short poem the author defines greed so well. The words above
the title makes one stop and think. I pondered on these words and thought about all that is going on in our world - it is heart breaking. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with these words.
Great Poem, Barry!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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In this short poem the author defines greed so well. The words above
the title makes one stop and think. I pondered on these words and thought about all that is going on in our world - it is heart breaking. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with these words.
Great Poem, Barry!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your great review, Much appreciated. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cute and true:"
Greed has no morals
Hides the truth for gain
Creates much pain." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Cute and true:"
Greed has no morals
Hides the truth for gain
Creates much pain." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated. The poem came third in the contest. Take care and have a good day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Helvi2
Hi Barry, You are right on point with your poem about Greed. A small poem like this can say a lot if you chose the right words. You did! Love how you managed to get a little rhyme in too. Very nicely done and a great entry for the contest! Wishing you luck! :o) Helvi
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Hi Barry, You are right on point with your poem about Greed. A small poem like this can say a lot if you chose the right words. You did! Love how you managed to get a little rhyme in too. Very nicely done and a great entry for the contest! Wishing you luck! :o) Helvi
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Helvi,
Thanks so much for your review. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from royowen
Yep, you're absolutely correct, Jesus did warn us that although it's not the root of all evil, it certainly is a temptation to lie, cheat and embezzle it, this is great advice Barry, thank you, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Yep, you're absolutely correct, Jesus did warn us that although it's not the root of all evil, it certainly is a temptation to lie, cheat and embezzle it, this is great advice Barry, thank you, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Thanks Roy. Yes, Greed is not good for anything. Thanks for the review. Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Well done
Comment from Janet Foor
As one of the seven deadly sins, this is an excellent 12 word poem. You packed it very succinctly in this little poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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As one of the seven deadly sins, this is an excellent 12 word poem. You packed it very succinctly in this little poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Janet,
Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed. The poem placed third in the contest. A dead heat with some others.
Take care.
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
What an excellent short poem. I'm sure it was a challenge to write a poem in so few words. I wouldn't dare enter the contest. You have got greed nailed on the head. I really enjoyed reading your poem, I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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What an excellent short poem. I'm sure it was a challenge to write a poem in so few words. I wouldn't dare enter the contest. You have got greed nailed on the head. I really enjoyed reading your poem, I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Kirsten,
Thanks for your great review. The poem finished third in the contest.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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nice glad you won 3rd
Comment from Lulube
Yep, this poem pretty much sums it up in 12 words. Great choice for each valid point, the main ones. Great imagery for greed. Good luck in the contest.
lulube
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Yep, this poem pretty much sums it up in 12 words. Great choice for each valid point, the main ones. Great imagery for greed. Good luck in the contest.
lulube
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed the read. The poem placed third in the competition. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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well congratulations!! I find it extremely hard to get into the winning circle but it's been a longtime so maybe I will give another try.
lulube
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Keep writing. It will come. Cheers
Comment from Ulla
This is so very true, and it's being played out right in front of our eyes worldwide. It's amazing what is happening when one man has a crazy Idea. God help.us all. Good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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This is so very true, and it's being played out right in front of our eyes worldwide. It's amazing what is happening when one man has a crazy Idea. God help.us all. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Thanks so much for your review. Yes, God help us all is certainly the right call. Horrible to watch it all. But we must keep going. You take care and hopefully have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Greed is one of the Seven Deadly Sins. It defiantly keeps up away from God. There is so much greed in the world right now. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Greed is one of the Seven Deadly Sins. It defiantly keeps up away from God. There is so much greed in the world right now. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Barbara,
Thanks so much for your review. There is too much greed for sure. The poem finished third in the contest. Take care and have a good day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
