New birth
There is nothing like a new born baby6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, New Birth, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the destiny of mankind relies on the production of more humans along the way.
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This 1-6-1, New Birth, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the destiny of mankind relies on the production of more humans along the way.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
I only had two girls as children, but was delighted to have them, but they birthed four boys, and on granddaughter, and they are equally as beautiful in their own way, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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I only had two girls as children, but was delighted to have them, but they birthed four boys, and on granddaughter, and they are equally as beautiful in their own way, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Roy
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Welcome
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a very good poem. Those three lines have a powerful message. New babies bring great joy to their families. They are a gift from God.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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This is a very good poem. Those three lines have a powerful message. New babies bring great joy to their families. They are a gift from God.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much
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You're welcome
Comment from Sugarray77
Good morning
This is an excellent entry for this prompt. Your artwork is stunning and sets up your theme perfectly. Great choice of end rhymes that support the theme. But, I would ask... what does the word hoy mean?
Melissa
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Good morning
This is an excellent entry for this prompt. Your artwork is stunning and sets up your theme perfectly. Great choice of end rhymes that support the theme. But, I would ask... what does the word hoy mean?
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much. Hoy means : used to attract someone's attention.
""Hoy! Look!""
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how your poem captures the simple wonder of a boy and the miracle he brings! The word choice of "hoy" at the end makes me smile. There's a lightness to your poem that brings a sense of joy . Keep up the great work - this poem is full of charm!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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I love how your poem captures the simple wonder of a boy and the miracle he brings! The word choice of "hoy" at the end makes me smile. There's a lightness to your poem that brings a sense of joy . Keep up the great work - this poem is full of charm!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This is a cute poem. The baby is adorable. Nice rhyming scheme. Babies are so nice. They truly are miracles. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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This is a cute poem. The baby is adorable. Nice rhyming scheme. Babies are so nice. They truly are miracles. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you 🙂
