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Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is a very creative way to make a political statement. You have my admiration for your ability to do that. Good luck in the contest and happy writing!
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This is a very creative way to make a political statement. You have my admiration for your ability to do that. Good luck in the contest and happy writing!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh this is just a winner isn't it? I can't possibly imagine who the author is. But the gorilla/banana theme has a certain ring to it:) My favourite parts are the little extras of gorilla happiness in parentheses - uh-huh! oo-yeah! The gorilla groove is going with a swing and making this a fun and lyrical read. The keepers are all locked up and the gorillas have their long-awaited freedom. Wonderful! Good luck! Debbie
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Oh this is just a winner isn't it? I can't possibly imagine who the author is. But the gorilla/banana theme has a certain ring to it:) My favourite parts are the little extras of gorilla happiness in parentheses - uh-huh! oo-yeah! The gorilla groove is going with a swing and making this a fun and lyrical read. The keepers are all locked up and the gorillas have their long-awaited freedom. Wonderful! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really loved the energy in your poem! The way you made the gorillas take over with such confidence and fun was awesome. I couldn't help but smile at the image of them strutting around the zoo and taking charge. The playful tone of your words really brought it to life. It was like I could feel the beat and see the gorillas dancing through the zoo. Keep writing like this - it's super entertaining!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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I really loved the energy in your poem! The way you made the gorillas take over with such confidence and fun was awesome. I couldn't help but smile at the image of them strutting around the zoo and taking charge. The playful tone of your words really brought it to life. It was like I could feel the beat and see the gorillas dancing through the zoo. Keep writing like this - it's super entertaining!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thanks Michael. Listen to the actual recording at the top of the entry if you can, cause it is way more entertaining than just reading the lyrics.
