Walking Our Winter Beach
I walk alone remembering you.3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
The title sets out the scene for the reader and the poem evokes memories for the poet - special precious moments shared with a loved one who is no longer present 'you are gone'
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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The title sets out the scene for the reader and the poem evokes memories for the poet - special precious moments shared with a loved one who is no longer present 'you are gone'
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the read and feedback.
Comment from ESOSTINE
This poem is a passionate reminder of the lovely experiences shared with your partner, and a longing for more of such. I could feel the depth of your emotion and loss. Well done, dear. Wishing you, more joy and peace as wade through life. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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This poem is a passionate reminder of the lovely experiences shared with your partner, and a longing for more of such. I could feel the depth of your emotion and loss. Well done, dear. Wishing you, more joy and peace as wade through life. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the read and feedback. Appreciate the time you took to read and respond.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a vivid vision you've painted through both imagery and emotion... great use of both to create a reality for your reader to share! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Such a vivid vision you've painted through both imagery and emotion... great use of both to create a reality for your reader to share! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the read and encouraging review.
