Comment from BethShelby

Exceptional

This has been the kind of story that I enjoy reading. It has been thoroughly entertaining, and you did a wonderful job with it. I hope you publish it. I look forward to your finishing the other one you had started where the wonder was sure her son is innocent.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025

Thank you Beth, I'm rewriting The Fix at the moment so I should be posting some chapters soon. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed this chapter and thank you for the six stars. I have one more chapter left to post.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Danielle was right. There really wasn't any other way she could learn about her natural parents' deaths, and I doubt she realized how dangerous her nosing around would be.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025

Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Two genuinely lovely adoptive parents and you captured their responses beautifully, Jacob - both the emotion and the concern. Well done and thank you for sharing. Debbie

Whatever comes next, we can deal (with) that

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025

Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Jacob, it a wonderful continuation to your story. I'm glad that Danielle has come to terms with her family. I found a small thing: Whatever comes next, we can deal (with)that. All best, Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025

Thank you, Ulla, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I'm glad Danielle is accepting Michael and Emma as her parents. I am curious is she and Callum are going to become more than friends. He stood by her during this entire problem.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025

Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Jacob,

Another fine chapter to your book. I am so glad Danielle found out the truth about her parents. I am curious about where this story is going.

Keep writing my friend

Cecilia

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025

Thank you, Cecilia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 04-Jan-2025

You're welcome my friend

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

A great chapter focused on tying up loose ends and restoration, even building, of relationships. You do a great job on both accounts. I like the part about Danielle thinking on what Mary might be thinking.

You've done a wonderful job of writing a book on here, my friend! Thank you for keeping me occupied all these months!! I'd love to see it published.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025

Thank you, Rhonda, I will be approaching literary agents later this year, but I will need to make sure it's properly edited first. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 04-Jan-2025

The good thing about being on this site is that you are given a lot of help on the editing part. Good luck with it, and let us know how you do!!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I really loved the raw emotion in your story. The tension between Danielle and Emma and Michael felt so real - it made me feel their concern. The moment when she decides to call Emma and Michael "Mum" and "Dad" really touched me. Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025

Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.