2024 Japanese Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 116 "~ The Nativity Scene ~"x
15 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, yes, memories of our childhood Christmas always seem to be there, and emerge at this time, your little Bethlehem sounds beautiful, such a clever dad, very well written and presented****kahpot
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Excellent, yes, memories of our childhood Christmas always seem to be there, and emerge at this time, your little Bethlehem sounds beautiful, such a clever dad, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very heartwarming presentation of your childhoods special memory. O, t h e mind of a child... how dear, how kasting. Nicely done, I hope to give my children lasting grand memories, that are simple, but special, like the one your father created fir you.
RJ
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Very heartwarming presentation of your childhoods special memory. O, t h e mind of a child... how dear, how kasting. Nicely done, I hope to give my children lasting grand memories, that are simple, but special, like the one your father created fir you.
RJ
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, I bet that was a really great Bethlehem that he put together. I wish I could have seen it. We used to visit Tom's mom and dad in Bethlehem, PA for Christmas. They had a lot of great things to see there. Thank you for sharing with us! love, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year my dear friend! Teri
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Gypsy, I bet that was a really great Bethlehem that he put together. I wish I could have seen it. We used to visit Tom's mom and dad in Bethlehem, PA for Christmas. They had a lot of great things to see there. Thank you for sharing with us! love, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year my dear friend! Teri
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We have small nativity scene on our fireplace hearth and a large outside one. We're still building onto that one. Maybe next year, it'll be finished. I enjoyed reading. Yes, it is the small things that build memories. Wonderful job of writing.
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We have small nativity scene on our fireplace hearth and a large outside one. We're still building onto that one. Maybe next year, it'll be finished. I enjoyed reading. Yes, it is the small things that build memories. Wonderful job of writing.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Neonewman
What a beautiful, heart-warming piece you have delivered, Gypsy. I'm sorry his work disappeared. It will live on in your memories.
God bless,
Steve
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What a beautiful, heart-warming piece you have delivered, Gypsy. I'm sorry his work disappeared. It will live on in your memories.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from shelley kaye
omg that is so cool!! awesome artistry!
love the waterfall!!
do you know what the rocks/cliff are made from?
anyway, this was a great haibun!
not sure if it will pass as poetry for the poetry contest but could be wrong
smooth flow through the prose and haiku
didn't notice any spag or typos...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
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omg that is so cool!! awesome artistry!
love the waterfall!!
do you know what the rocks/cliff are made from?
anyway, this was a great haibun!
not sure if it will pass as poetry for the poetry contest but could be wrong
smooth flow through the prose and haiku
didn't notice any spag or typos...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. I am glad that you had such nice Christmases with the villages that your father made of the town of Bethlehem. Patricia.
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This is very well written I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. I am glad that you had such nice Christmases with the villages that your father made of the town of Bethlehem. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine write, Gypsy, and sounds like it was amazing. Chilldhood memories of a magic time in your life are to be clung to, bec as use as we get older, memories like this are hard to v ome by. Viewed through childhood, Chrisrmas was magical
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Another fine write, Gypsy, and sounds like it was amazing. Chilldhood memories of a magic time in your life are to be clung to, bec as use as we get older, memories like this are hard to v ome by. Viewed through childhood, Chrisrmas was magical
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
What a moving and poignant Christmas memory, Gypsy. It is a lovely story as you set the scene for your 5-7-5... I love haibuns and it's a perfect response for this prompt. I wish you good luck.
Melissa
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What a moving and poignant Christmas memory, Gypsy. It is a lovely story as you set the scene for your 5-7-5... I love haibuns and it's a perfect response for this prompt. I wish you good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I'm so sorry that such a precious representation of your father should have been lost. I too adored anything small when I was young so I can relate to the magic this city model held for you. It was not just beautiful to your young eyes but symbolised the essence of Christmas and reinforced your enduring faith. Thank you for sharing your charming Haibun, Gypsy. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! Debbie
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I'm so sorry that such a precious representation of your father should have been lost. I too adored anything small when I was young so I can relate to the magic this city model held for you. It was not just beautiful to your young eyes but symbolised the essence of Christmas and reinforced your enduring faith. Thank you for sharing your charming Haibun, Gypsy. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! Debbie
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024