Bermuda Time
If it starts at two, that's the time to set out.2 total reviews
Comment from Lana Marie
The story of my life. Always competing against the clock to get somewhere on time. Someone recently told me when I asked them how close they lived to church, was "so close that I'm always late." I feel like that about my job four blocks away. I'm always there right on time or almost late.
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The story of my life. Always competing against the clock to get somewhere on time. Someone recently told me when I asked them how close they lived to church, was "so close that I'm always late." I feel like that about my job four blocks away. I'm always there right on time or almost late.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoy how you captured the feeling of time moving forward in such a playful way! The clock becoming a character that laughs adds a fun twist to the poem. The poem flows so smoothly. Your choice of words really brings the image of time teasing you to life.
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I really enjoy how you captured the feeling of time moving forward in such a playful way! The clock becoming a character that laughs adds a fun twist to the poem. The poem flows so smoothly. Your choice of words really brings the image of time teasing you to life.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
