The Big O
A gift?2 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I'm not sure where the tickle is coming from but it's obviously a great release for her. Should that be who(o)pie? Imaginative, thought-provoking but only one thing wrong: the 2nd line has only 6 syllables! Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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I'm not sure where the tickle is coming from but it's obviously a great release for her. Should that be who(o)pie? Imaginative, thought-provoking but only one thing wrong: the 2nd line has only 6 syllables! Debbie
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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I corrected the missing word - thank you!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow! What a fun poem that was completely different! I love it gave me a chuckle. I appreciate you posing this really good!
Awesome subject matter too lol.
I think this one deserves the big one.Just for the smile factor! Good luck and all the best!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Wow! What a fun poem that was completely different! I love it gave me a chuckle. I appreciate you posing this really good!
Awesome subject matter too lol.
I think this one deserves the big one.Just for the smile factor! Good luck and all the best!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review! and the stars
