Lingering Twilight
a Lune poetic form23 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful 5-3-5 poem, your words put the reader in a very peaceful place, dusk is a wonderful time of the day, very well written and presented****kahpot
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What a beautiful 5-3-5 poem, your words put the reader in a very peaceful place, dusk is a wonderful time of the day, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from judiverse
Beautiful artwork selection. It goes so well with your lune. It's good to think there is a bit of light. It gives a bit of spirit. With all the hours of darkness, we can become depressed. Twilight is a beautiful sight to behold. Excellent wording, and best of luck in the contest. Merry Christmas to you and family. judi
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Beautiful artwork selection. It goes so well with your lune. It's good to think there is a bit of light. It gives a bit of spirit. With all the hours of darkness, we can become depressed. Twilight is a beautiful sight to behold. Excellent wording, and best of luck in the contest. Merry Christmas to you and family. judi
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much, Judi!!
Melissa
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from ESOSTINE
A very lovely Lune poem, a great entry for the Lune Poetry Contest. The gentle transition of twilight into shadows of dusk is done in this with a masterful tact. Well done, dear Sugarray!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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A very lovely Lune poem, a great entry for the Lune Poetry Contest. The gentle transition of twilight into shadows of dusk is done in this with a masterful tact. Well done, dear Sugarray!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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thank you so much Esostine!! I really appreciate your wonderful comments and review!!
Fondly,
Melissa
Comment from Trina Layne
This was beautiful. The image and the lines together work as a great pair. Congratulations on your work and much success to you in the competition!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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This was beautiful. The image and the lines together work as a great pair. Congratulations on your work and much success to you in the competition!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much!
Melissa
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune, Lingering Twilight, has the proper formatting and speaks to the pregnant pause that the realization of day's end has on the observers who see the day dive in slow motion into the horizon.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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This lune, Lingering Twilight, has the proper formatting and speaks to the pregnant pause that the realization of day's end has on the observers who see the day dive in slow motion into the horizon.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Hello Bill. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely thought about the lingering colors of sunset. I think of twilight as meaning dawn or dusk, "before sunrise and after sunset," one definition says. So you went with the dusk definition and show us the gradations of twilight before night. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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A lovely thought about the lingering colors of sunset. I think of twilight as meaning dawn or dusk, "before sunrise and after sunset," one definition says. So you went with the dusk definition and show us the gradations of twilight before night. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Hi there Helen. Thanks so much. I love the quiet time at dusk and thought I would use it for a theme. Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Lovely Lune for the Lune Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too. Good luck!
Gypsy
"Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it." - George Santayana
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Lovely Lune for the Lune Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too. Good luck!
Gypsy
"Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it." - George Santayana
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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thanks so much Gypsy for the lovely review!!
Melissa
Comment from l.raven
Hi Melissa, I remember when I lived in
Florida...they had the most beautiful skies...
at sunrise...and at sunset...one of the things
I miss the most...
I like this form my sweet friend...
very well done...
I love your poem...and love this picture...
very nicely written...Love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Hi Melissa, I remember when I lived in
Florida...they had the most beautiful skies...
at sunrise...and at sunset...one of the things
I miss the most...
I like this form my sweet friend...
very well done...
I love your poem...and love this picture...
very nicely written...Love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Hello Linda... thank so much for your lovely comments and review. So appreciate you and send you Christmas love! Hugs!
Melissa
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your so very welcome sweet girl...
Merry Christmas...and Happy New Year...love you...xxoo
Comment from poetwatch
I don't really get the Lune poetry, Melissa, but yours are true. You paint the picture with words, and you found the perfect picture to go with them. I wish I could do what you do. Say a lot with very little. This is a good entry for the Lune Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I don't really get the Lune poetry, Melissa, but yours are true. You paint the picture with words, and you found the perfect picture to go with them. I wish I could do what you do. Say a lot with very little. This is a good entry for the Lune Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Good morning Jose! Thank you for your lovely review!! Have a wonderful Christmas!!
Melissa
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I like this lune about the sunset time. I enjoy both sunrise and sunset. I get up before dawn as I am a morning person always have been. My wife is a night owl. her favorite time is sunset when we crack open a bottle of wine and enjoy a peaceful moment today as the sun sets.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I like this lune about the sunset time. I enjoy both sunrise and sunset. I get up before dawn as I am a morning person always have been. My wife is a night owl. her favorite time is sunset when we crack open a bottle of wine and enjoy a peaceful moment today as the sun sets.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Hello Jake. Thank you for a delightful review and lovely comments about the sunset and twilight! Have a very Merry Christmas!!
Melissa