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Resilience

Nature mirrors human strength

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Elias,
This is a wonderfully metaphoric poem that seems to use rivers and their path and light reflection for the path of getting through life troubles.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published my first book titled,
"The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry. It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or just search Joan Pechter The Interloper on Amazon.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2025

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A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2025

Comment from Peter Jarvis
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Your poem is a beautiful tapestry of resilience, echoing both human and natural fortitude. It skillfully uses the acrostic format to underscore its message, making each line even more meaningful.
Thank you for sharing this delightful piece
Blessings.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
    Thank you for your thoughtful review and for taking the time to read with such care. May blessings find their way to you, and may the resilience you saw in the poem reflect the strength within your own journey.
reply by Peter Jarvis on 02-Jan-2025
    Take care and stay safe.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Nature has a powerful force in many areas and growth in the spring season always astounds me as plants and flowers thrive. I enjoyed your sentiment here as we are sometimes one with nature, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024

Comment from Beejay
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A great acrostic poem entry, with a message running all the way through it. Thank you for sharing it, it really resonated with me. I'm so pleased I read and reviewed it.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024

Comment from royowen
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I'd have to say, that we can mirror nature's strength, or resilience, are we part of it, or is it part of us? Beautifully written, probably best kept as one stanza, seeing it is one word, well done, good luck, blessings Roy





 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Elias,

This is a great acrostic poem. This poem is deep and the words speak volumes. I like the line, "Shadows weave stories in fractured light", This line is unique and speaks to this reader.

Well done and good luck in the contest.

Ceciila

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024