Humitree
A poem of creation, my word is create20 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
"Manitree, Girlitree fate
radiate"
i really like this line, yes, we should celebrate and be very happy that we have the opportunity to be here, as before, you certainly have wonderful imagination and creativity, an excellent read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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"Manitree, Girlitree fate
radiate"
i really like this line, yes, we should celebrate and be very happy that we have the opportunity to be here, as before, you certainly have wonderful imagination and creativity, an excellent read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Begin Again
I'm not a poet, nor am I a sci-fi fan, but what I am - is a writer who likes to dig deep into the mind and find something different and filled with creativity. You've done that ten-fold with this series of poems. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I'm not a poet, nor am I a sci-fi fan, but what I am - is a writer who likes to dig deep into the mind and find something different and filled with creativity. You've done that ten-fold with this series of poems. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thank you, carol, that's really great of you to say that I appreciate it very much! I shall continue with this species of tree and human. Let's see where it leads continue, making pictures and put it out there and your comments encourage me.Thank you very much! I hope that you're ready for your holiday and that it's wonderful for you and yours!
Comment from Tim Margetts
I really am enjoying this series, Lea.
This poem is excellent in the way it plays with a single rhyme throughout.
Though you did forget the Dr's rhyme... exterminate
Tim x
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I really am enjoying this series, Lea.
This poem is excellent in the way it plays with a single rhyme throughout.
Though you did forget the Dr's rhyme... exterminate
Tim x
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Lol.... Thank you, Tim. ISO appreciate you and your review truely. I'm very happy to receive them! I always like your comments. They're very insightful, because you see exactly what i'm writing about, no question. A mark of a true writer and also the reader being the most important for their opinions and comments thank you for those too! I hope your day is great.And your holidays even greater!
Comment from DonandVicki
Your poem did for me what all good poetry should do and that is; open and expand the readers mind. I get the word create in your poem and enjoyed the moving experience.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Your poem did for me what all good poetry should do and that is; open and expand the readers mind. I get the word create in your poem and enjoyed the moving experience.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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That's awesome.What a fine complimentI really appreciate that! Best of all, you like it for which i'm pleased. I'm always mindful of a person's time as well as to read it. And I think the time to think about it and offer comments and send that in so that too is valuable. I hope you have a most amazing holiday that you get everything you want and need. That you and yours are healthy, and you have an amazing night ho.Ho ho all that good stuff!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great One Word Base Poem. This is science fiction to the hilt. To think trees and humans can recreate is bizarre. I guess in a sci-fi any thing is possible.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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This is a great One Word Base Poem. This is science fiction to the hilt. To think trees and humans can recreate is bizarre. I guess in a sci-fi any thing is possible.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you again, Cecilia. I'm glad this is entertaining. It's entertained me so far as far as imagining it and making the art and writing the words.It's been a great process, thinking about a story. Appreciate your comments and hanging out here with me again, ho.Ho ho!
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You're welcome
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent work on crafting an amazing poem. Your internal rhymes add a depth to this work and the creative concept of humans and trees is new and interesting. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Excellent work on crafting an amazing poem. Your internal rhymes add a depth to this work and the creative concept of humans and trees is new and interesting. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thanks Melissa! You are always encouraging and supportive. Appreciate that about your reviews most of all! I'm always happy when someone likes what I wrote. And this is no different plus it has an inkling of carrying on! I hope you and yours and well and your holiday goes grand ho.Ho ho!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the one Word Base poem contest. I am intrigued by these creatures you have created and I hope you have plans to write a book about them. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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An excellent entry for the one Word Base poem contest. I am intrigued by these creatures you have created and I hope you have plans to write a book about them. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Yes, you hit the nail on the head. Definitely, thinking about it. As the storyline seems to be coming almost unbidden. So we'll go with the flow and see what happens. Thanks, marilyn.Once again.I'm happy to see you here! Have an awesome evening!
Comment from Jim Wile
Fantastic monorhyme poem, Lea! You definitely exceeded the requirements of this contest. This should be a sure winner.
Such a neat followup to your previous poem about this unusual hybrid couple tasked with repopulating the earth with a new species. These accompanying pictures are fantastic too. I really loved this poem.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Fantastic monorhyme poem, Lea! You definitely exceeded the requirements of this contest. This should be a sure winner.
Such a neat followup to your previous poem about this unusual hybrid couple tasked with repopulating the earth with a new species. These accompanying pictures are fantastic too. I really loved this poem.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hello, thank you! The most amazing review and the big 6. Wow, that's a real honor thank you! It's starting to become a thing. Perhaps I shall see. Will the rest of this new species goes. Thank you Jim for the rocking review! The amazing rating in most of all, your time, which is precious as everyone's thank you again!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
you nailed the format of this contest and created a rich world filled with alien creatures. I like the image chosen and like these lines the best
Ancient ooze the last to wait
distilate
Human tree a hybrid state
inseminate
Mixed genes rolling dice bent gate
commiserate
Set the stones with strong debate
retaliate
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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you nailed the format of this contest and created a rich world filled with alien creatures. I like the image chosen and like these lines the best
Ancient ooze the last to wait
distilate
Human tree a hybrid state
inseminate
Mixed genes rolling dice bent gate
commiserate
Set the stones with strong debate
retaliate
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Totally glad you liked this one completely pleased.Thank you very much! Always happy to see you here. You've usually got on point things to say, and you don't say anything unnecessary, and I believe you're truly truthful in everything that you do r saying. I think you deserve everything santa can bring you! Thank you again, thank you for your time. Have an amazing holiday for I don't chat with you again until later!
Comment from EILEEN LAW
So cool. All the same rhyme could. Be. A rap Song. Cool. Picture too. You write all the time.....do you ever rest? Creative juices flowing
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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So cool. All the same rhyme could. Be. A rap Song. Cool. Picture too. You write all the time.....do you ever rest? Creative juices flowing
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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No rest for the wicked they say.... I wonder about the good wicked....? thank you for the awesome six star I'm amazingly happy to receive them and appreciate so very much!