Manitree
What would happen if....26 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Lea,
This is a great acrostic poem. I love these mutated poems that you right. I am not into sci-fi, but your tree series is great and I enjoy reading them.
Well done
Cecilia
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Lea,
This is a great acrostic poem. I love these mutated poems that you right. I am not into sci-fi, but your tree series is great and I enjoy reading them.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow, this is powerful. My favorite line is Toss the Salad of Genetic Mix. What a strange twisted way of looking at the mutation of a tree into a human form. But I love it just the same. This has creativity oozing out of every pour in the acrostic poem. You can turn this into a novel if you so choose to do it and do it soon before someone else comes along and steals the idea.
Jesse
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Wow, this is powerful. My favorite line is Toss the Salad of Genetic Mix. What a strange twisted way of looking at the mutation of a tree into a human form. But I love it just the same. This has creativity oozing out of every pour in the acrostic poem. You can turn this into a novel if you so choose to do it and do it soon before someone else comes along and steals the idea.
Jesse
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Acrostic Poetry Contest. My goodness you have an entire civilization of these creatures already on pages. I would just love to see a story about them in print. The concept seems very original and creative. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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An excellent entry for the Acrostic Poetry Contest. My goodness you have an entire civilization of these creatures already on pages. I would just love to see a story about them in print. The concept seems very original and creative. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn, it's a great idea. It has crossed my mind. It seems to be developing into a thing! Best of all you like it! So happy to receive your kind comments. A great writing and your time, most of all! I hope you're all ready for the holiday and that it's a great 1 for you and yours. I wish you an awesome night! Ho ho ho!
Comment from ESOSTINE
This is a very interesting poem on mutation. I hope not to see such change, when man and tree grow and walk on the same trunk. Hahaha!. Thanks for sharing your science fiction. Well done, dear Lea.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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This is a very interesting poem on mutation. I hope not to see such change, when man and tree grow and walk on the same trunk. Hahaha!. Thanks for sharing your science fiction. Well done, dear Lea.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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That's such a great compliment.Thank you very much.I'm very happy you like this! I appreciate your time and effort to his well.As your great rating. May the big guy in the red suit? Make it down your chimney and give you all that you and yours deserve and want, have an awesome night!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lea,
This is a nicely done acrostic poem possibly about creating things like Frankenstein or cloning or just how genetics can mutate things.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Merry Christmas
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hi Lea,
This is a nicely done acrostic poem possibly about creating things like Frankenstein or cloning or just how genetics can mutate things.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Merry Christmas
Joan
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Joan, I so appreciate your review.Thank you! Great commentary and encouragement.Sad appreciate as well! But what's the best is that you spent the time on it and that you liked it? Time is valuable these days.So thank you for that too.And I hope that you have a wonderful holiday, you and yours and your night's grand!
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You are most kindly welcome on all counts, Lea.
Joan
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You are most kindly welcome on all counts, Lea.
Joan
Comment from jake cosmos aller
another good Sci-Fi related poem. I like the theme and the image chosen liked these lines the best
Inside cocoons of churning wild growth comes the meld
Observe the birth of the impossible leafed, rooted babe
Never doubt the changeling of species where Manitree is born
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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another good Sci-Fi related poem. I like the theme and the image chosen liked these lines the best
Inside cocoons of churning wild growth comes the meld
Observe the birth of the impossible leafed, rooted babe
Never doubt the changeling of species where Manitree is born
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hi, Jake. Thank you so much for your attention. Your reading your comments, your rating spending your time on these, which is most valuable, especially at christmas, and it's such a busy world that we live in. I always appreciate it thank you!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This one's ups the ante of The Meld and makes it less speculative and more terrifyingly descriptive.
Even more amazing artwork you created to accentuate it all.
Good luck @ the polls with this entry. Xo
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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This one's ups the ante of The Meld and makes it less speculative and more terrifyingly descriptive.
Even more amazing artwork you created to accentuate it all.
Good luck @ the polls with this entry. Xo
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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And she liked this one too.Thank you again your awesome rating and and your current comments.I'd just like to fall off my chair every time. Very happy that you enjoy them! I wish you and yours the most amazing holiday ever!
Comment from Jim Wile
That is so cool, Lea. What a unique description of how this odd species came into being. Evidently there was some disastrous upheaval and massive destruction, but life always seems to find a way to survive, even if it's with a strange new species. I loved that picture too. Really neat poem!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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That is so cool, Lea. What a unique description of how this odd species came into being. Evidently there was some disastrous upheaval and massive destruction, but life always seems to find a way to survive, even if it's with a strange new species. I loved that picture too. Really neat poem!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wow Jim, i'm totally happy you like it! Any actually, why about the poem?And it's theme. I'm glad you're enjoying my artwork too. It was exactly the figure I pictured in my mind. Thank you, jim.May you and yours have the most many holiday and let the force be with you!
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was a very interesting acrostic poem. It isn't the sort of word one usually sees used for this type of work. I love the artwork that you chose. It is very different from what I usually see on here. Great job!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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This was a very interesting acrostic poem. It isn't the sort of word one usually sees used for this type of work. I love the artwork that you chose. It is very different from what I usually see on here. Great job!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thanks Monica! I appreciate that! I actually made that picture the other ones too. Really glad you like them most of all, I'm grateful for your time. I'm for you, review you're ready and your insightful comments! Have the best holiday. May the force be with you!
Comment from Sanku
Great effort ! The word mutation has bees described very well ,Since Change is the only constant ,we might as well be ready for Manitree.
I liked the expression'deviant soup'
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Great effort ! The word mutation has bees described very well ,Since Change is the only constant ,we might as well be ready for Manitree.
I liked the expression'deviant soup'
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wow! So glad you enjoyed it thank you! Thank you for this Greek review. Your kind comments, awesome rating for most of all your time! Fastest that you liked it of which ISO appreciate. So I wish you and yours a happy holiday and that you're having a great night!