Rudolf's Christmas
Rudolf tries to find his way home.13 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Raul, first...CONGRATULATIONS my sweet friend
on a well deserved win...
I love your story told...and was so glad that Santa
and Rudolph finally found each other...it takes both
Santa and Rudolph to drive Santa's sleigh
well done sweet guy...I love your story told...
and love your picture...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Raul, first...CONGRATULATIONS my sweet friend
on a well deserved win...
I love your story told...and was so glad that Santa
and Rudolph finally found each other...it takes both
Santa and Rudolph to drive Santa's sleigh
well done sweet guy...I love your story told...
and love your picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from LJbutterfly
Congratulations on your well deserved win of the Christmas Flash contest. This is a delightful story about Rudolph searching for Santa in order to find his way home. The story has a very happy Christmas ending. Santa delivers toys, and Rudolph once again leads the sleigh.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Congratulations on your well deserved win of the Christmas Flash contest. This is a delightful story about Rudolph searching for Santa in order to find his way home. The story has a very happy Christmas ending. Santa delivers toys, and Rudolph once again leads the sleigh.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Your intention was good, but it had no hook, no background. It felt as if you were reading a PR pamphlet.
We need the reason he got lost, We need to know how Santa felt when he disappeared. With a few tweeks it could be very good. If you make some changes I can come back and give you a 5. Love to you and yours. Karen
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Your intention was good, but it had no hook, no background. It felt as if you were reading a PR pamphlet.
We need the reason he got lost, We need to know how Santa felt when he disappeared. With a few tweeks it could be very good. If you make some changes I can come back and give you a 5. Love to you and yours. Karen
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thanks!
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:-)
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I have given a reason why Rudolf lost his way and how he can get his magic back of flying to Santa and his friends. Can you please review it for a five star rating?
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I don't know how I missed those two sentences. You now have a five. Karen
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Thank you so much, my friend!
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:-)
Comment from evilynne
Congratulations! That is a well written wonderful tale for children of all ages. Glad Rudolph and Santa did find each other in the end! MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU! Evi
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Congratulations! That is a well written wonderful tale for children of all ages. Glad Rudolph and Santa did find each other in the end! MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU! Evi
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you, my friend! Merry Christmas to you too!
Comment from Pam (respa)
Very nice artwork and story to go with it, Raul. Congratulations on the win. It is very well deserved. You tell a very good story about what happens when Rudolph is missing. A very good opening hook. You follow that with very good thoughts from Rudolph and a very good comparison with his determination being "Like a bright star in the night sky."
You also show how concerned Santa is about missing his special reindeer. Both Rudolph and Santa are searching for the other part of their team, but haven't been successful yet, and it causes worry and concern.
Alas, the worry is finally over and all is well, and "joy fills the hearts of all who witness their reunion." A very good Christmas story. Hope you have a very Merry Christmas and wonderful New Year.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Very nice artwork and story to go with it, Raul. Congratulations on the win. It is very well deserved. You tell a very good story about what happens when Rudolph is missing. A very good opening hook. You follow that with very good thoughts from Rudolph and a very good comparison with his determination being "Like a bright star in the night sky."
You also show how concerned Santa is about missing his special reindeer. Both Rudolph and Santa are searching for the other part of their team, but haven't been successful yet, and it causes worry and concern.
Alas, the worry is finally over and all is well, and "joy fills the hearts of all who witness their reunion." A very good Christmas story. Hope you have a very Merry Christmas and wonderful New Year.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you! You have made my day!
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You are very welcome and deserving. I'm glad I made your day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet natured Christmas story Raul and I enjoyed the fun, the humour and the thoughtfulness within and wish you a very Merry Christmas, love Dolly x x x x x
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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This is a sweet natured Christmas story Raul and I enjoyed the fun, the humour and the thoughtfulness within and wish you a very Merry Christmas, love Dolly x x x x x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you! Merry Christmas to you too!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Raul, what a great story. So much imagination and well written. Congratulations on the win I enjoyed reading it. .I like the theme of the story.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hi Raul, what a great story. So much imagination and well written. Congratulations on the win I enjoyed reading it. .I like the theme of the story.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
Comment from DonandVicki
A wonderful flash fiction story about a wayward reindeer. Luckily Santa was looking for him. I enjoyed the light hearted feel of this story that has a good ending.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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A wonderful flash fiction story about a wayward reindeer. Luckily Santa was looking for him. I enjoyed the light hearted feel of this story that has a good ending.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a okay story. I kind of confused about the whole sleigh thing. Why is Rudolph pulling a sleigh without Santa in it. How does Santa deliver toys without Rudolph. Please explain.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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This is a okay story. I kind of confused about the whole sleigh thing. Why is Rudolph pulling a sleigh without Santa in it. How does Santa deliver toys without Rudolph. Please explain.
Cecilia
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
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You're Welcome
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congratulations, Raul, on your contest win! What a lovely story for the prompt! I'm so pleased that Santa and Rudolph were finally reunited. I mean, where would be for Christmas otherwise? A very well expressed story! Warm wishes Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Congratulations, Raul, on your contest win! What a lovely story for the prompt! I'm so pleased that Santa and Rudolph were finally reunited. I mean, where would be for Christmas otherwise? A very well expressed story! Warm wishes Debbie
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!