Dancing in the Dark
A blank verse for the contest5 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
Not just a great blank verse but also a lesson im marine biology.
This is a fascinating piece of poetry and I thank you for sharing it.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Tim
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Not just a great blank verse but also a lesson im marine biology.
This is a fascinating piece of poetry and I thank you for sharing it.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Tim
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
This poem beautifully describes the characteristics of this marvellous sea creature, though looking small and vulnerable, is very powerful and feared by other sea animals because of its venoms. The poem flowed very well and made a great and interesting read. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
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This poem beautifully describes the characteristics of this marvellous sea creature, though looking small and vulnerable, is very powerful and feared by other sea animals because of its venoms. The poem flowed very well and made a great and interesting read. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem really brings the image of this octopus to life! I love the way you describe her movements as a "ballet". The shift in tone towards the end adds an unexpected thrilling twist. What an enjoyable read!
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Your poem really brings the image of this octopus to life! I love the way you describe her movements as a "ballet". The shift in tone towards the end adds an unexpected thrilling twist. What an enjoyable read!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your poem beautifully captures the mesmerizing and deadly dance of the sea creature, with vivid imagery and graceful language. The portrayal of the creature as a confident performer in her own underwater ballet is both captivating and haunting. The suspenseful ending with the great white shark adds a dramatic twist to the serene performance. Thank you for sharing this evocative piece! Best of luck in the contest
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Your poem beautifully captures the mesmerizing and deadly dance of the sea creature, with vivid imagery and graceful language. The portrayal of the creature as a confident performer in her own underwater ballet is both captivating and haunting. The suspenseful ending with the great white shark adds a dramatic twist to the serene performance. Thank you for sharing this evocative piece! Best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
Comment from Trina Layne
I quite liked this. The use of language was fantastic. It was an educational piece as well. I got some great information on jellyfish and their habitat and food chains in there. Beautiful work!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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I quite liked this. The use of language was fantastic. It was an educational piece as well. I got some great information on jellyfish and their habitat and food chains in there. Beautiful work!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts-much appreciated!
